Shopping is now one of the most popular forms of leisure activity in many countries for young adults. Why is this? Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
In our modern society, teenagers nowadays prefer to do shopping as a leisure activity. While this trend becomes increasingly popular around the world, I personally believe that it is a positive development for young adults and for the nation as well.
Firstly, as shopping is a leisure activity, it relieves the stress of teenagers from schoolwork. It is obvious fact that for better school ranking in the city, they often give hand out homework and tests to students. However, many adolescents are stressed out due to the workload and high academic anticipation from their parents. At the moment, it is essential to have students take part in some leisure activity to alleviate pressure. For example, happiness found in their shopping which provides them an opportunity to fresh their minds from education for a certain time period.
Secondly, when youngsters do shopping, they tend to analyze and plan according to their budget which is a very essential life skill. It plays a paramount role to learn to cope with the psychological and financial problems in the coming future for young adults. For instance, during my college days, I always tried to shop with little money, which required a lot of research and budget planning. However, this skill has proven to be extremely useful today, as I divide the finances across multiple projects.
Lastly, knowing the country's economy starts from local markets, therefore it is important for youngsters to shop, in order to know the market trends. In other words, when youngsters do shopping, the money they spend circulates among multiple traders and ultimately aids in increasing the country's economy in various aspects.
To recapitulate, the rise of shopping tendency among the young-aged group could possibly be caused by alleviation of stress from school. Although an increase in the nation’s economy is a major factorand youngsters attaining life skills is a great achievement as well as development for them.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 75, Rule ID: MAY_COULD_POSSIBLY[1]
Message: Use simply 'could'.
Suggestion: could
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, for example, for instance, as well as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1658.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23028391167 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78728002408 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608832807571 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 504.9 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 24.2234046602 49.4020404114 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 110.533333333 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1333333333 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.06666666667 7.06120827912 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234141556038 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0713563378822 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0566822361704 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132310913378 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0836099885844 0.056905535591 147% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.26 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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