With the spark of telecommunications and information era, technology has improved to a point where it is very easy for everyone to know almost everything they want about one person or another, especially if these people are especially popular.
Let aside the social network topic and speaking only for traditional media, it has become very, if not extremely difficult for a society to see someone as a respectable person, let alone a hero.
Long ago, when the only ways to communicate with other people were analog, the majority of one's country population was not aware of what was happening around their lives, thus making possible for a government or a king to spread only the necessary information in order to elevate someone or the king itself to the rank of a hero.
Good examples of this phenomena is the ancient Egyptian society, where their king was seen as a God, or medieval warriors whose deeds have been told for centuries, making them heroes of the countries they were fighting for.
Nowadays this approach is not possible though, since it is not possible for someone to filter the information a society gets of his personal life.
The intense media coverage we experience in fact tries to expose every possible flaw a person could have, so it is no longer possible for the general public to see them as a hero. They may have done something peculiar a few times, but this is no longer enough to make them heroes of a society, since there may have been a lot of actions that were not something you can expect form someone you call "hero".
It is also important to note that no one knows everything, but we all expect a hero to know the right thing to say in every situation. Because of that, media tries to ask a popular person questions about almost every topic, expecting them to know what to say, and the result is often, if not ever, disappointing.
We can thus conclude that exposing a popular person to the nowadays level is incompatible with seeing them as a hero.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
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Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, thus, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.5258426966 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 33.0505617978 91% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 58.6224719101 67% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1660.0 2235.4752809 74% => OK
No of words: 351.0 442.535393258 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72934472934 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32839392791 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69253228687 2.79657885939 96% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 215.323595506 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.527065527066 0.4932671777 107% => OK
syllable_count: 548.1 704.065955056 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.10617977528 193% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 20.2370786517 49% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 35.0 23.0359550562 152% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.4626773699 60.3974514979 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 166.0 118.986275619 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.1 23.4991977007 149% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.7 5.21951772744 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.97078651685 161% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207171694593 0.243740707755 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0877177913255 0.0831039109588 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0516587077066 0.0758088955206 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.093375392208 0.150359130593 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0540793658066 0.0667264976115 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.4 14.1392134831 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.95 48.8420337079 74% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.9 12.1743820225 139% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.75 12.1639044944 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.38706741573 103% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 100.480337079 72% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 21.0 11.8971910112 177% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.0 11.2143820225 143% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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