The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six area of the world.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie chart describe the ratio of water consumption for different three category like industrial, Agriculture and Domestic use in six different region of the world.
Overall, it is clear that most consumed water category is agriculture while Europe is in leading to use water for industrial use. Also domestic Europe, South and North America are using large amount of water for household use rather than other three countries.
According to chart, People of South America, Africa, Central Asia and South East Asia are using largest amount of water for irrigation by 71%, 84%, 88% and 81% respectively. However, North America and Europe stand with 39% and 32% in same category. Meanwhile, North America and Europe both using highest amount of water for their industrial use just around half portion of their total uses.
Africa, Central Asia and South east Asia are spend below 10% of total water for domestic use, on other hand South America, Europe and north America stand with little more at 19%, 15% and 13% respectively. Furthermore, least amount of water uses for industry in Africa with 9% and central Asia and South East Asia both with 7%.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 75, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'category' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'categories'.
Suggestion: categories
...f water consumption for different three category like industrial, Agriculture and Domest...
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Line 1, column 147, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'region' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'regions'.
Suggestion: regions
...lture and Domestic use in six different region of the world. Overall, it is clear tha...
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Line 2, column 130, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...eading to use water for industrial use. Also domestic Europe, South and North Americ...
^^^^
Line 3, column 91, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'using the largest'.
Suggestion: using the largest
...a, Central Asia and South East Asia are using largest amount of water for irrigation by 71%, ...
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Line 3, column 290, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'using the highest'.
Suggestion: using the highest
...eanwhile, North America and Europe both using highest amount of water for their industrial us...
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Line 4, column 46, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'spent'.
Suggestion: spent
...a, Central Asia and South east Asia are spend below 10% of total water for domestic u...
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Line 4, column 149, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (America) must be used with a third-person verb: 'stands'.
Suggestion: stands
...South America, Europe and north America stand with little more at 19%, 15% and 13% re...
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Line 4, column 216, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[3]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: ', the least'.
Suggestion: , the least
...%, 15% and 13% respectively. Furthermore, least amount of water uses for industry in Af...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 6.8 176% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 960.0 965.302439024 99% => OK
No of words: 192.0 196.424390244 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39336376344 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 106.607317073 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.526041666667 0.547539520022 96% => OK
syllable_count: 302.4 283.868780488 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.6733895352 43.030603864 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.0 112.824112599 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 22.9334400587 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.125 5.23603664747 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 1.69756097561 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186636378664 0.215688989381 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104338226138 0.103423049105 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0625176509271 0.0843802449381 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148404637716 0.15604864568 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0564086788657 0.0819641961636 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.2329268293 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 61.2550243902 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.3012195122 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 11.4140731707 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.4329268293 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.