Fresh water is a limited resource in some parts of the world. Today, increasing demand has made it a global problem. What are the causes of increasing demand? What measures should governments and individuals take to respond to this problem?
Nowadays due to the shortage of fresh water in some places, the increasing need for water resources has become a stumbling global problem to be tackled with. There are several reasons resulting in this and some solutions have to be taken by people and government.
On the one hand, the growing population should be responsible for this problem. As the population has rapidly grown In recent years, the demand for water has been enlarged accordingly, especially in some big cities around world, seriously resulting the lack of water sources. Furthermore, people require high demand of fresh water in our daily life, such as take a shower, do a laundry, clean the room. Also those who pursue the high-quality life need advanced facilities equipped with water resource,like garden and swimming pool, stimulating the demand for water. On the other hand, increasing water consumption in agriculture and factories is another salient reason. Both are expanded with large amounts of water to provide food and industrial goods for a growing population. For example, plenty of water is used for cooling equipment and source material in industries and irrigating land and feeding livestock in farming.
Therefore, government should has the obligation to intervene and takes the steps combat this problem. Firstly, regulators should expand the publicity to improve the awareness of population. Secondly, Formulating rules for water conservation can fine factories and farmings for wasting and polluting water source. Thirdly, more water can be declined by the way of sustainable development. For instance, sewage treatment and purification seawater. As for people, we can form the good habit of saving water to recycle the water consumption. For example, the water for washing vegetables can be used to flush the toilets.
In conclusion, considering the deteriorating water crisis, it is urgent for us to reduce water consumption and conserve freshwater resources. several measures mentioned can be used for reference.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, third, thirdly, as for, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, by the way, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1715.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.47923322684 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92356185408 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578274760383 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 531.9 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.7130573059 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.2777777778 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3888888889 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5 7.06120827912 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 5.01903807615 398% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209933779292 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0740894718055 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0634041711841 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14065138476 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0633645892815 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.57 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.