Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to complain about one incident that happened to me in the supermarket located in Board Road.
My name is Jerry and I, as a software engineer, lived one block away from the supermarket. I often visit it twice a weekto purchase daily necessities since the supermarket is quite near my apartment building.
Yesterday was Sunday and I went to the mart to buy some sea food, snacks and fruits. Unfortunately, when I was trying to pick up a fish, I fell down because the floor was wet and extremely slippery. In addition, there was no staff around and no warning sign ei...
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Sentence: I often visit it twice a weekto purchase daily necessities since the supermarket is quite near my apartment building.
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Sentence: The supermarket is located in the center of the residental area and thousands of customers shop in it.
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Sentence: You, as the manager of the super market, is responsible for maintaining a comfortable and safe place for people to do shoping.
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Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.647 4.0
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