agree/disagree telephone or TV greater influence on people's lives
New technologies have made many big changes in man's life. The two biggest improvements that has happened in recent decades are TV and telephone. Some people may think that telephone had the grates impact on human's life. but I firmly contend that TV has much more impact on human's life and culture than telephone. I will delve into the most important reasons.
first of all, TV has a large influence on people's daily schedule. It is now an inseparable part of people's everyday life. Especially in my country Iran that almost all the families gather together at night and spend their time watching their favorite movie together. for Iranians it is one of the few times that all the family members spend time together rather than in dinner time. Prior to the TV upcoming, the nights were very quiet and very boring. It was hard for family members to find subject to talk to each other. But now with the TV miracle, no time is boring and homes are never quiet.
Second reason that comes in my mind is that nowadays TV industry is a huge industry. TV consist of various shows like movies, advertisement, singings, scientific shows, educational shows and etc. many peoples work for this industry and much more people benefits from it. In addition of many peoples that are working directly for the TV, it helped many goods producing companies to sell their products. It also helps many scholars to explain their discovery for people so one way or another it is helping educating people and widening their view sights. it also helps artists to spread their art products such as songs, paintings, theaters and writings. For example, before TV, it took people a lot of time to read a scientific book and understand it completely. In fact, if one wanted to have knowledge about something like astronomy or biology it took them a lot of time. But now there is several documentaries about any scientific issues that are being showed every day in TV and it is getting easier for people to be familiar with a scientific matter every day.
Finally, I need to mention that although TV has a huge impact on our daily life but it has not always a good impact. TV also have a lot of bad influences in humans’ life and has made mane degradation. for example, many peoples especially teenagers waste a lot of their times watching TV. The time that they could spend to learn a good skill or to communicate with their friend and learn to be sociable. But watching TV for very long hours during day, make them a little unsociable and alone and unfocused on their carrier skills improvements. another very bad impact of TV is that sometimes people become addicted to it. It is very probable that when one starts to watch a series or sitcom he would not leave the TV until the end of the TV show. It could waste a lot of people time and occasionally makes them depressed. In my experience, when I was a teenager I really became addicted to the Korean series. I watched Korean series all day long without any studying in a time that was very important for me to concentrate on my studies to pass the university entrance exam. I am really regretful about that time I’ve waste and I would suggest to every student whether in school or university to stay away from TV till the end of their studies.
In conclusion, I think TV had a lot more influence on people's life rather than telephone. It is true that telephone also had a large impact but TV change many humans’ life. Sometime I asked myself that how life would be if there was no TV? How people would feel about songs, football games, theaters, scientific matters if they didn’t have the chance to watch them and enjoy them?
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, may, really, second, so, for example, i think, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, such as, first of all, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 10.4613686534 229% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 5.04856512141 178% => OK
Conjunction : 29.0 7.30242825607 397% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 19.0 12.0772626932 157% => OK
Pronoun: 70.0 22.412803532 312% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 76.0 30.3222958057 251% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 5.01324503311 160% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2941.0 1373.03311258 214% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 654.0 270.72406181 242% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.49694189602 5.08290768461 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.05701727356 4.04702891845 125% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40961371418 2.5805825403 93% => OK
Unique words: 279.0 145.348785872 192% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.426605504587 0.540411800872 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 943.2 419.366225166 225% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.55342163355 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 3.25607064018 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 8.23620309051 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 13.0662251656 8% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 654.0 21.2450331126 3078% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.2860985944 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 2941.0 110.228320801 2668% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 654.0 21.698381199 3014% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 148.0 7.06452816374 2095% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 4.19205298013 262% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 4.33554083885 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 4.45695364238 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.27373068433 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22026552207 0.272083759551 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.22026552207 0.0996497079465 221% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0662205650399 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147690741658 0.162205337803 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0326646429576 0.0443174109184 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 326.8 13.3589403974 2446% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -575.41 53.8541721854 -1068% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 5.55761589404 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 256.0 11.0289183223 2321% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 10.3 12.2367328918 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 38.61 8.42419426049 458% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 105.0 63.6247240618 165% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 56.0 10.7273730684 522% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 263.6 10.498013245 2511% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 39.0 11.2008830022 348% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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