Global warming is one of the biggest issues facing humans nowadays, caused mainly by humans. It has most catastrophic effects on humans and humans have to take action to reduce the risks. In this paragraph, we will discuss to give some possible solutions.
Global warming is the increase of Earth's average surface temperature due to effect of greenhouse gases, such as carbon dioxide emissions from burning fossil fuels or from deforestation, which trap heat that would otherwise escape from Earth.
So firstly, The Government can solve environmental problems with a number of actions. One of them is to implement a pollution threshold for factories. If a company produces more pollution than the permitted threshold, it will be fined. Therefore, industrial companies would take necessary measures to reduce their waste.
Apart from the Government, individuals too can partake in protecting the environment. Firstly, individuals can reduce household waste. For instance, people can use cloth bag instead of plastic bag when shopping. After all, plastic can not be decomposed and its build up will harm the Earth. Secondly, people should use more public transportation and if possible, walk more. That way, pollution that comes from vehicles can be minimised.
In conclusion, people damage the environment with the high usage of private cars and industrial waste, and also by throwing rubbish irresponsibly. Government can solve these problems by implementing waste limit and enhancing public transport system. Individuals can also help by changing our consumption habits such as reducing energy use, travelling by mass transports or walking and planting trees.
Global warming is one of the biggest issues facing humans nowadays, caused mainly by humans. It has most catastrophic effects on humans and humans have to take action to reduce the risks. In this paragraph, we will discuss to give some possible solutions.
Global warming is the increase of Earth's average surface temperature due to effect of greenhouse gases, such as carbon dioxide emissions from burning fossil fuels or from deforestation, which trap heat that would otherwise escape from Earth.
So firstly, The Government can solve environmental problems with a number of actions. One of them is to implement a pollution threshold for factories. If a company produces more pollution than the permitted threshold, it will be fined. Therefore, industrial companies would take necessary measures to reduce their waste.
Apart from the Government, individuals too can partake in protecting the environment. Firstly, individuals can reduce household waste. For instance, people can use cloth bag instead of plastic bag when shopping. After all, plastic can not be decomposed and its build up will harm the Earth. Secondly, people should use more public transportation and if possible, walk more. That way, pollution that comes from vehicles can be minimised.
In conclusion, people damage the environment with the high usage of private cars and industrial waste, and also by throwing rubbish irresponsibly. Government can solve these problems by implementing waste limit and enhancing public transport system. Individuals can also help by changing our consumption habits such as reducing energy use, travelling by mass transports or walking and planting trees.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, after all, apart from, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 4.92783505155 284% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 32.9175257732 36% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 3.85567010309 337% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1375.0 937.175257732 147% => OK
No of words: 256.0 206.0 124% => OK
Chars per words: 5.37109375 4.54256449028 118% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 3.78020617076 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81696423044 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 127.690721649 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.62109375 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 428.4 290.88556701 147% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.41237113402 120% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 9.13402061856 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 12.6804123711 8% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 256.0 16.3608247423 1565% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 44.8134815571 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1375.0 76.5299724578 1797% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 256.0 16.8248392259 1522% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 118.0 4.34317383033 2717% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 7.41237113402 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.29898043652 0.216113520407 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.29898043652 0.0766984524023 390% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0603063233224 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.222927171841 0.12726935374 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.377567045589 0.0580467560999 650% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 131.9 8.37731958763 1574% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -196.82 70.7449484536 -278% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 3.82989690722 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 104.3 7.45979381443 1398% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.35 8.71597938144 176% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 21.27 7.59969072165 280% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 80.0 41.2886597938 194% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 55.0 8.62886597938 637% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 104.4 8.54432989691 1222% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 55.0 8.15463917526 674% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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