Certainly, it is true that, in this contemporary era, value of hard work is being escalating day by day among people for getting monetary gain. Most of the people introspect that only hard work is crucial where others contemplate that it may be more reason to attain financial success. According to my perspective, definately it may be more reason for getting financial success.
To start with, hard work is dominating parameter of acquire financial success. They start giving their hundred percent from starting of their life like, selection of school, after that Universities then finding a good job etc. Moreover, more hard work is being done by people according to their capacity like work is being done more than 12 hours in a day by them for earning bread and butter. For example, if, people set up their own business so they will have to do 24×7 work due to competition in market with different brands and all things before earning any profit.
Looking at the other view, there are lots of reason for getting financial gain rather than tough grind like, long-term investments, acquiring new skills etc. If, we would learn new skills it is also splendid. For instance, if we invest our money at the age of 25 in share market carefully so, it is good in our retirement age in front of those people who do not have any plans regarding their upcoming days. Second, money can be saved from monthly expenses by people. Third, dedication for getting financial success it should be in every person. Fourth, we should keep maintaining our budget.
On a concluding note, undoubtedly hard work is a key of our life instead of any other thing for getting financial gain yet, we must understand that all things are important in its own place. We could not depend on one way for attaining financial success. However, we should work hard with smart work or managing our monthly expenses.
- Many people today especially in the developed world are choosing to have fewer children or none at all Why is this happening and do you think it is a good trend 73
- Nowadays many people choose to be self employed rather than to work for a company or organization Why might this be the case What could be the disadvantages of being self employed 73
- With the development of technology children are now living in a world that is completely different to what it was 50 years ago What problems do this cause for society and the family 73
- Some people think that new houses should be built in the same style as older houses in the local area Others disagree and say that local authorities should allow people to build houses in the style s of their own choice Discuss both view and give your own 78
- Many people believe that the increasing number of cars in cities is the biggest source of pollution and waste Others think that industries are the ones causing pollution Discuss both views and give your opinion 84
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, may, moreover, regarding, second, so, then, third, for example, for instance, it is true, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1565.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81538461538 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52010331337 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.556923076923 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 467.1 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.7576987027 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.8125 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3125 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.3125 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223181591423 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0882412180685 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0755538479205 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154179282821 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0480159997502 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 50.2224549098 136% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.45 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.