An ancient, traditional remedy for insomnia — the scent of lavender flowers — has now been proved effective. In a recent study, 30
volunteers with chronic insomnia slept each night for three weeks on lavender-scented pillows in a controlled room where their sleep was
monitored electronically. During the first week, volunteers continued to take their usual sleeping medication. They slept soundly but
wakened feeling tired. At the beginning of the second week, the volunteers discontinued their sleeping medication. During that week,
they slept less soundly than the previous week and felt even more tired. During the third week, the volunteers slept longer and more
soundly than in the previous two weeks. Therefore, the study proves that lavender cures insomnia within a short period of time.
Write a response in which you discuss what specific evidence is needed to evaluate the argument and explain how the evidence would
weaken or strengthen the argument.
Although it seems like the scent of Lavender has cured these patients suffering with chronic insomnia, the author has not given sufficient
evidence or data analysis to reach the conclusion that lavender scent was the only factor influencing the sleep pattern. Numerous detailed
and analytical questions need to be answered to reach the conclusion author has derived.
The author stated the scent of lavender as a traditional cure for insomnia which has now been proved based on the study involving 30
chronic isomnianc patients. He has failed to mention the biological classifications of these people. Were these people old? Were they
undergoing any extra medical treatments? Or was chronic insomnia their only ailment? Neither does the author talk about the sleep patterns
of these patients. It is quite possible that some of these patients were old aged and did not have significant active sleeping hours. It
also falls in the scope of possibility that the people under observation had working days of physical labor and slept soundly during the
third week.
Ignoring the absent data about the physical details of the patients, author also fails to mention the psychological conditioning of these
patients. Can it not be possible that during the first two weeks many of the patients had some stress and tension leading to insomnia and
without any sleeping medications woke up feeling tired? And during the third week, after sleeping in a controlled environment for 2 weeks
they finally began to relax, resulting in a sound sleep. The author should have thrown some light on the psychological setting of these
patients while describing their improving sleep patterns.
Moreover, the study states that the scent of insomnia starts working after regularly using it for minimum two weeks. This begs the question of the
activation duration of this remedy. Will everybody need to regularly sleep with lavender scented pillows for 2 weeks? Or is this duration
different for everyone? Also, if this is a scented remedy passing through the respiration system, why does it take 2 weeks show its effects?
If any residue of these scents is settling in the body, will it have any effects in the long term? Failing to shed light on any of these
points, the author has created serious holes in the foundation of his argument. all of this finally leads to one basic question: Is Scent of
lavender the only factor affecting the sleep of the patients?
Answering all of these questions is vital for reaching an informed decision about the efficacy of the lavender scent in curing insomnia.
If the questions raised lead to positive replies, then we can say with fair certainty that the lavender scent is indeed curing insomnia.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...vender scent is indeed curing insomnia.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, if, moreover, so, then, third, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.6327345309 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.9520958084 54% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 11.1786427146 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 13.6137724551 51% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 36.0 28.8173652695 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 55.5748502994 106% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 16.3942115768 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2309.0 2260.96107784 102% => OK
No of words: 448.0 441.139720559 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15401785714 5.12650576532 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.60065326758 4.56307096286 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58955413479 2.78398813304 93% => OK
Unique words: 226.0 204.123752495 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.504464285714 0.468620217663 108% => OK
syllable_count: 685.8 705.55239521 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.96107784431 101% => OK
Article: 5.0 8.76447105788 57% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.70958083832 185% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.67365269461 239% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.22255489022 71% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 19.7664670659 121% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.8473053892 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 51.2205030291 57.8364921388 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.2083333333 119.503703932 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6666666667 23.324526521 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.41666666667 5.70786347227 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 21.0 5.15768463074 407% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 15.0 5.25449101796 285% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.20758483034 61% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 6.88822355289 87% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 13.0 4.67664670659 278% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.298013103696 0.218282227539 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0871143439674 0.0743258471296 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0995801968195 0.0701772020484 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0942303818213 0.128457276422 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0931296099186 0.0628817314937 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 14.3799401198 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 48.3550499002 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.197005988 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.5979740519 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.32208582834 101% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 98.500998004 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 12.3882235529 89% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.1389221557 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.9071856287 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...r has derived. The author stated the scent of lavender as a traditional cure ...
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...n proved based on the study involving 30 chronic isomnianc patients. He has faile...
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...people. Were these people old? Were they undergoing any extra medical treatments?...
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...the author talk about the sleep patterns of these patients. It is quite possible ...
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...ve significant active sleeping hours. It also falls in the scope of possibility t...
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... the psychological conditioning of these patients. Can it not be possible that du...
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...controlled environment for 2 weeks they finally began to relax, resulting in a s...
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...ht on the psychological setting of these patients while describing their improvin...
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...two weeks. This begs the question of the activation duration of this remedy. Will...
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...ese scents is settling in the body, will it have any effects in the long term? Fa...
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... in the long term? Failing to shed light on any of these points, the author has...
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...leads to one basic question: Is Scent of lavender the only factor affecting the s...
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...vender scent is indeed curing insomnia.
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, if, moreover, so, then, third, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.6327345309 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.9520958084 54% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 11.1786427146 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 13.6137724551 51% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 36.0 28.8173652695 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 55.5748502994 106% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 16.3942115768 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2309.0 2260.96107784 102% => OK
No of words: 448.0 441.139720559 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15401785714 5.12650576532 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.60065326758 4.56307096286 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58955413479 2.78398813304 93% => OK
Unique words: 226.0 204.123752495 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.504464285714 0.468620217663 108% => OK
syllable_count: 685.8 705.55239521 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.96107784431 101% => OK
Article: 5.0 8.76447105788 57% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.70958083832 185% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.67365269461 239% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.22255489022 71% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 19.7664670659 121% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.8473053892 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 51.2205030291 57.8364921388 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.2083333333 119.503703932 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6666666667 23.324526521 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.41666666667 5.70786347227 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 21.0 5.15768463074 407% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 15.0 5.25449101796 285% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.20758483034 61% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 6.88822355289 87% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 13.0 4.67664670659 278% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.298013103696 0.218282227539 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0871143439674 0.0743258471296 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0995801968195 0.0701772020484 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0942303818213 0.128457276422 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0931296099186 0.0628817314937 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 14.3799401198 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 48.3550499002 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.197005988 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.5979740519 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.32208582834 101% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 98.500998004 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 12.3882235529 89% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.1389221557 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.9071856287 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.