Global warming is one of the most serious issues that the world’s facing today. What are causes of global warming and what measures can governments and individuals take to tackle this issue?
n recent years, the problems related to global warming like sea level and violent storms have been of growing concern. As a result, governments and their citizens must take responsibility for dealing with this issue, such as imposing policies to reduce emissions and stop cutting down trees for individual purposes.
Two of the biggest reasons for global warming are greenhouse gasses and deforestation. Nowadays, expanding of many factories and the increase of vehicles cause the amount of these gasses released into the atmosphere. For example, in my city, the number of people using their private vehicles increases rapidly, which emit a greater quantity of exhaust fumes into the environment. Moreover, as the population grows, more land is required to construct homes and shopping centers. To meet people’s demands, logging companies cut down trees for furniture, paper and building materials, which lead to deforestation.
Because of the serious consequences, governments could adopt policies and laws to cut down on emissions, for example, encouraging companies and plants to use renewable energy from solar panels and wind. Although governments take action to slow down global warming, individuals should raise their awareness about protecting the environment. First, people can reduce the consumption of paper by recycling paper products and using alternative materials made from fabric. Second, people should take part in the projects to plant more trees to replace the older ones that were cut.
In conclusion, global warming will have a devastating effect on our planet if we do not do something to safeguard the environment. Governments and individuals are responsible for protecting the planet and implement effective measures to limit greenhouse gas emissions and deforestation.
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- Some people believe that reading stories from a book is better than watching TV or playing computer games for children To what extent do you agree or disagree 78
- Global warming is one of the most serious issues that the world s facing today What are causes of global warming and what measures can governments and individuals take to tackle this issue 78
- Some people believe that reading stories from a book is better than watching TV or playing computer games for children To what extent do you agree or disagree 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: N
n recent years, the problems related to g...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, moreover, second, so, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1528.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.59706959707 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96808193821 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615384615385 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 466.2 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.1441177945 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.538461538 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.23076923077 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169881796604 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0597210574987 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0477545497363 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106242027608 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0312486902511 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.2 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.06 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.