The map illustrates the changes undertaken in college in 1978 and 2001.
It can be seen that the college was still in the same place. Anyway, the number of classrooms increased significantly. In addition to existing classrooms in the west, new classrooms in the east were built as well. The garden in the north was destroyed to make way for a shop and a toilet. The place in the south where a toilet used to be, became the main entrance to the college. The reception was transported in the centre of the area. A car park stayed where it was before, but its area increased by hal...
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