you recently had a holiday visiting your friends and you stayed in their house.
Include:-
- Thank your friend for staying with
them
- Tell them what you enjoyed most
about holidays
- Explain you are sending photos of
the holidays with the letter.
Dear Kamal,
Hope this letter finds you in radiant health. I would like to thank you from the bottom of my heart for the comfortable stay which you and your family provided me during the holidays which I spent at your place. It was a great time for me after an ages. I couldn’t realize how fast the time fly during holidays.
I already missing the food which you cooked for me. It was so delicious and celestial. It was wonderful time that we refresh our childhood memories. The places around your city are so beautiful. I was never witnessed of such a vibrant places before. I thing which I’m missing a lot is the spectacular view of mountain and greenery from the window of the room which you provided me for my stay.
I captured the number of photos in my camera at your house and the places which we visited. After seeing that pictures that time again stand in front of my eyes. I’m sending all the photographs with this letter as a memory of the grateful holidays.
Warm wishes,
Mandy
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 246, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'an age' or simply 'ages'?
Suggestion: an age; ages
...place. It was a great time for me after an ages. I couldn’t realize how fast the time f...
^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 253, Rule ID: YOU_THING[1]
Message: Did you mean 'think' or 'thinks'?
Suggestion: think; thinks
...ssed of such a vibrant places before. I thing which I’m missing a lot is the spectacu...
^^^^^
Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...m which you provided me for my stay. I captured the number of photos in my cam...
^
Line 6, column 93, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “After” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... house and the places which we visited. After seeing that pictures that time again st...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.03092783505 297% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 823.0 937.175257732 88% => OK
No of words: 183.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.49726775956 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33598728019 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 127.690721649 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.584699453552 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 246.6 290.88556701 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.4081209905 44.8134815571 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 58.7857142857 76.5299724578 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.0714285714 16.8248392259 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.428571428571 4.34317383033 10% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23292896836 0.216113520407 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0655046339568 0.0766984524023 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0803813643813 0.0603063233224 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159335891828 0.12726935374 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0698686852909 0.0580467560999 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.3 8.37731958763 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 83.66 70.7449484536 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 7.45979381443 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.93 8.71597938144 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.96 7.59969072165 92% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 8.62886597938 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.2247191011 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.