IELTS Writing Task 2/ IELTS Essay:
You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
It is sometimes said that people should be encouraged to get married before they are 30, as this is the best for the individual and for society.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with the above statement.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
There is a belief in some cultures/countries that young people should get married before turning 30, otherwise, they will remain singles for the remainder of their lives. Many of these people still believe that getting married and start a family is not only better for society but for the individual. They also believe in the institution of marriage as the core of the family and thus, the center of society. In recent times there is a current aiming against marriage. Claiming that it is not necessary to get married to create a family and have children.
I personally think that people only should get married when they are ready. It is not about the age but, about how prepare is every individual to get that kind of commitment and moreover, the responsibilities that come with it. Starting life with a new partner without getting to know each other properly, could be harmful to the young couple. I am convinced that before marriage the couple must live together for a while taking a time to know each other's weaknesses and strengths. One thing is sharing time as boyfriend and girlfriend, the other very different is living together as a married couple.
In my experience When you take the time to live with your significant other, there are bigger probabilities of success as a couple later on when a wedding is on the horizon. Couple themes are the perfect example to describe the complexity of human relationships.
In conclusion, I don't think that getting married before turning certain age is better than doing it after. Getting married should be a very thoughtful decision for every individual there are other factors more important than age. And only each person could decide whether is ready to start a married life or not.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 470, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Claiming
...e is a current aiming against marriage. claiming that it is not necessary to get married...
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Line 7, column 18, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...uman relationships. In conclusion, I dont think that getting married before turni...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, still, thus, while, in conclusion, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1442.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87162162162 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70731869327 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.513513513514 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 455.4 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.2153913453 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.1333333333 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7333333333 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.73333333333 7.06120827912 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227158205148 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0753817386406 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0660296705708 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131436238579 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0643585562456 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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