Knowledege plays vital role in lifes of mankind.This issue raises the controversial issue of whether it is good to have deep knowledge in one particular subject or have widespread knowledge about variety of subjects.In my view, both the views are not completely exclusive as I support that having widespread knowledge is important but that does not mean that one should possess half knowledge in other subjects.According to me to have deep knowledge in one subject also needs
to have knowledge in other subjects.
In the present contemporary world, every subject is inter related or linked in one way or other way so one cannot be an expert in one subject by not having the knowledge on other subjects.Let us take the example of Archeology.To precisely date the artifacts one should posses the knowledge on history, soil, customs ,litreature and many other to accurately date the artifacts that were discovered.
Nonetheless, There might be few exceptions where one can be an expert without having knowledge on other subjects.one can be an expert in maths without knowing the physics but one cannot understand all the concepts of physics by being ignorant on maths.To be an pioneer in physics one should have firm command on maths but it is not the other way around when it comes to maths.
As we humans advance ourselves more in the technology,The more inter linked and inter connected subjects will be in future.Even today for many advanced concepts and theroms we are unable to distinguish them in to a particular category of subject.There might occur some day where humans completely stop dividing the knowledge into different subjects.Thus, Possesing knowledge is more important and one should not divide into various subjects and consider it as a limit while acquiring.Thus ,In my opinion having widespread knowledge is more important and one should not consider differentiation of subjects as a limit.
- The well being of a society is enhanced when many of its people question authority 58
- Formal education tends to restrain our minds and spirits rather than set them free
- Technology has made it easier for people to communicate with each other Some people prefer to talk over the phone while others prefer to communicate through text messages What type of communication do you prefer and why 65
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement In twenty years there will be fewer cars in use than there are today Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 66
- Formal education tends to restrain our minds and spirits rather than set them free 66
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, nonetheless, so, thus, while, in my opinion, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 43.0788530466 42% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1607.0 1977.66487455 81% => OK
No of words: 311.0 407.700716846 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16720257235 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08030529736 2.67179642975 115% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 212.727598566 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.485530546624 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 515.7 618.680645161 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 9.59856630824 10% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 20.6003584229 19% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 77.0 20.1344086022 382% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 96.81264122 48.9658058833 198% => OK
Chars per sentence: 401.75 100.406767564 400% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 77.75 20.6045352989 377% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 17.5 5.45110844103 321% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.5376344086 307% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 11.8709677419 17% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243713778509 0.236089414692 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.162500829684 0.076458572812 213% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0562135419242 0.0737576698707 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155476964911 0.150856017488 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0511401246839 0.0645574589148 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 41.8 11.7677419355 355% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -15.14 58.1214874552 -26% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 6.10430107527 239% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 34.5 10.1575268817 340% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.89 10.9000537634 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.96 8.01818996416 137% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 86.8835125448 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 28.0 10.002688172 280% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 32.8 10.0537634409 326% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 28.0 10.247311828 273% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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