There are many people who think that parents should choose ways for their children to spend their free time. However, there are many others who disagree and believe that children should be allowed to use their time on activities they choose.
It is true that parents have a significant influence on children’s upbringing. While many people argue that parents should decide what types of activity their children need to spend time for, there is a widespread agreement to the contrary that children should have the right to take up their preferred activities.
On the one hand, parents claim that they are responsible for giving priority to their children’s safety. In reality, there are a number of dangerous activities which are at risk of accidents for children, for example climbing. This causes considerable worries to those who are fathers and mothers, leading to the idea of keeping their children away from those activities. In addition, during the children’s formative years, shaping their personalities may be affected badly without their parent’s care. Many parents are aware of this importance and encourage their children to take part in activities which bring significant benefits to later life such as playing chess for the development of their intelligence.
On the other hand, the freedom of children in pursuing their own interests is widely believed to be equally important. First of all, proponents of this idea argue that this is able to stimulate children’s creativity as well as the quality of their independence. For instance, they could gain the capacity of making decisions in different cases and make most of the knowledge which they learn from various activities to support their subjects in school. Another point of view is that promoting the pursuit of numerous hobbies can enable them to awaken their inner fire. As a result, this provides a good basis for further development like choosing the major at the university.
By way of conclusion, the first position pays much more attention to children’s safety, while the second respects the freedom of children’s choice. Yet, I believe that parents should let children feel free to do their loved things as long as they are under the watchful eyes of their parents.
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- There are many people who think that parents should choose ways for their children to spend their free time However there are many others who disagree and believe that children should be allowed to use their time on activities they choose 78
- There are many people who think that parents should choose ways for their children to spend their free time However there are many others who disagree and believe that children should be allowed to use their time on activities they choose 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 270, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
...is causes considerable worries to those who are fathers and mothers, leading to the ide...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, may, second, so, well, while, for example, for instance, in addition, such as, as a result, as well as, first of all, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1698.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22461538462 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82055682949 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.566153846154 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 508.5 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.2095813111 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.285714286 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2142857143 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.2857142857 7.06120827912 160% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.50350099219 0.244688304435 206% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.162665347494 0.084324248473 193% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0930220801654 0.0667982634062 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.30432737167 0.151304729494 201% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.058480479543 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.