The given bar chart compares the distance moving by five kinds of transport vehicle in United Kingdom in year 1990 and 2000.
Overall, it is clear that the number of kilometers of two means” bicycle” and “bike” was slightly decreased, the opposite was true for “ Ari”, “Bus” and “ Rail” over the period.
Look at the chart more detail, it can be seen that the number of kilometers that passengers travel by bicycle, motorbike, and air is much lower than traveling by bus and train.
In 1990, the number of kilometers traveled by bicycles and motorbikes was about 5 and 6 billion kilometers, respectively. In 2000, these amounts was dropped moderately to 3 and 4 billion kilometers, respectively. Meanwhile, the distance traveled by “ari”, “bus” and “train” had a slight growth over this decade, in 1990, the distance traveled by three means was 3, 40, 38 billion, respectively; In year 2000 has reached 5, 41 and 41 billion respectively.
Finally, 2000 witnessed a significant increase in mileage over 1990 with the amount of about 12.5 billion kilometers from 100 billion to 112.5 billion kilometers.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...at the number of kilometers of two means” bicycle” and “bike” was slightly decrea...
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...mber of kilometers of two means” bicycle” and “bike” was slightly decreased, the ...
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... period. Look at the chart more detail, it can be seen that the number of kilome...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, look, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 955.0 965.302439024 99% => OK
No of words: 185.0 196.424390244 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16216216216 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95903366059 2.65546596893 111% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 106.607317073 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605405405405 0.547539520022 111% => OK
syllable_count: 263.7 283.868780488 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.6436127286 43.030603864 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.428571429 112.824112599 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.4285714286 22.9334400587 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.42857142857 5.23603664747 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14080507999 0.215688989381 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0741239646019 0.103423049105 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0429406906337 0.0843802449381 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0833333861372 0.15604864568 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0472048296965 0.0819641961636 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.2329268293 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 11.4140731707 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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