Some people think it’s better to live with a roommate. Other people prefer to live alone. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
When we leave home to attend university or college, most of us have two options: We can either live with roommate or live alone. While I have never lived away from home, when time comes I would prefer to live with roommate than living alone. Doing so allow me to make new friends; teach me to adjust with new surroundings and new people; and give me chance to learn new things. It is cost effective also.
First, sharing room with someone gives me chance to make new friends. Having friends is important at new place. We could help each other in studies. We could hang out together. We could enjoy...
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