Your friend visited you in your country and stayed in a hotel that you have recommended. Write a letter to the hotel manager about your friend's unsatisfactory stay. In you letter :
1) Tell about your friend.
2) Describe the problem.
3) Suggest some improvement.
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing with regards to the issue during the stay of my close friend at your hotel and I would also suggest possible solution.
Let me introduce my friend at first. he is civil engineer, age 28 years from Pakistan with identification number 35202-56789432-1, and stayed in one of your hotel's room. I have recommended him to stay in your hotel, as I have explained him plus points during my stay two years back. he stayed for four days in room number 34 at the ground floor.
In relation to the issues during his stay, Although it's affordable and near to my house, there was a delay for allotment of the room. Furthermore, his room was not tidy up and room's shower was out of order. Third downside of the hotel was the poor condition of the carpet. Apart from that the cutlery provided was not clean properly.
As a solution, I would recommend to replace your carpets and cutlery as it had been stained and stinks. Proper attention is required for the shower cabin and it must be replaced too.
I hope you would definitely pay attention to the said issues, in order to provide best service to the customers. Otherwise, hotel and tourism industry is one of the leading business across the world. there will be a time when you wouldn't have enough customers,I am afraid.
Yours faithfully,
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 38, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: He
... Let me introduce my friend at first. he is civil engineer, age 28 years from Pa...
^^
Line 5, column 284, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: He
...s points during my stay two years back. he stayed for four days in room number 34 ...
^^
Line 7, column 24, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'recommend replacing'.
Suggestion: recommend replacing
...clean properly. As a solution, I would recommend to replace your carpets and cutlery as it had been...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 8, column 75, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'provide the best'.
Suggestion: provide the best
...tention to the said issues, in order to provide best service to the customers. Otherwise, ho...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 8, column 201, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: There
... the leading business across the world. there will be a time when you wouldnt have en...
^^^^^
Line 8, column 231, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: wouldn't
...he world. there will be a time when you wouldnt have enough customers,I am afraid. Y...
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Line 8, column 260, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , I
...e when you wouldnt have enough customers,I am afraid. Yours faithfully,
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, if, so, third, apart from, i am afraid
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1087.0 937.175257732 116% => OK
No of words: 233.0 206.0 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.6652360515 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90696013833 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61757542036 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.600858369099 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 323.1 290.88556701 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.0296174464 44.8134815571 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.6428571429 76.5299724578 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6428571429 16.8248392259 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.57142857143 4.34317383033 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274047787481 0.216113520407 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0871194890117 0.0766984524023 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0782541427595 0.0603063233224 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138519068803 0.12726935374 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0874957676783 0.0580467560999 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 8.37731958763 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.51 8.71597938144 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.68 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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