Some people believe that not all criminals should be kept in prison, but that some of them should be allowed to do unpaid work to help the community. Do you agree or disagree?
It is believed by few individuals that some convicts ought to be given unpaid work so that they serve society well, while others consider that all offenders should be held in prison. However, in my opinion, the formal view seems to be more rational because every crime is different and punishment to all is not justified.
There are umpteen reasons why I believe that few criminals should be considered to be unpaid work instead of sending to prison. This is because most of them are minor convicts, who may have multiple reasons for committing a crime. For example, a recent report by Hindustan Times revealed that in India around 70% of robberies were done to deal with financial needs since many impoverished people are unable to support their basic needs of food and shelter, which force them to do thieving, pickpocketing and house robberies. Therefore, these petty crimes offenders should not be subjected to harsh punishments, they should offer to do the community work.
On the contrary, some criminals who are responsible for heinous crimes such as murder and rape should be sent directly to prisons. If they were not sent to custody then they would be the ones held responsible for future crimes. Also, it is better to separate these people from society to create a safe and sound environment for everyone. Moreover, it is imperative to separate minor and major crime convicts, otherwise there will be strong chances that minor convicts will be influenced by others.
In conclusion, involving some minor offenders in community works is the best option to give them punishment and also as a chance to improve themselves. Since the reason behind the crime is essential to know, most of the crimes are done to deal with hunger, so putting them in jail is a wise decision.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, moreover, so, then, therefore, well, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 13.1623246493 198% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1490.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93377483444 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61788841737 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.559602649007 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 468.9 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 49.8882083596 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.166666667 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1666666667 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.25 7.06120827912 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.35448212941 0.244688304435 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12995981985 0.084324248473 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109393638365 0.0667982634062 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.20854367162 0.151304729494 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0834994788539 0.056905535591 147% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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