The graph shows the percentage of UK adolescent following a vegetarian diet
The diagram reveals the proportion of English lads who follow vegetarian die from 1960 to 2020.
It is obvious that more young people love a vegetarian diet in the past than in recent years. besides, there was a clear peak in 1980 and some peaks between 1990 and 2010
From 1960 to 1980, the number of people who followed a vegetarian diet increased gradually, the most were over 15 percent in 1980. After that, fewer and fewer adolescents tried keeping this diet and it decreased to approximately 4 percent in mere 1996. The percentage between 1990 and 2000 did not change too much and volatile.
However, it can be seen that many people liked to eat vegetarian again start from 2000. This situation gradually increases to 2010 and does not change so clearly then. Although the proportion of adolescents vegetarian has much decrease and do not be as good as in the past time, especially in 1990 it has some improvement and this proves that an average of UK teenagers now are conscious of vegetable and love eating vegetarian
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 44, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...is obvious that more young people love a vegetarian diet in the past than in rece...
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Line 2, column 95, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Besides
... diet in the past than in recent years. besides, there was a clear peak in 1980 and som...
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Line 4, column 268, Rule ID: PAST_TIME[1]
Message: Did you mean 'pastime'?
Suggestion: pastime
...ecrease and do not be as good as in the past time, especially in 1990 it has some improve...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...f vegetable and love eating vegetarian
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, however, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 5.60731707317 196% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 854.0 965.302439024 88% => OK
No of words: 179.0 196.424390244 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77094972067 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5810539549 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 106.607317073 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608938547486 0.547539520022 111% => OK
syllable_count: 247.5 283.868780488 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.0769800708 43.030603864 149% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.75 112.824112599 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.375 22.9334400587 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.25 5.23603664747 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236971875392 0.215688989381 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0885634202012 0.103423049105 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0451718910296 0.0843802449381 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130778819911 0.15604864568 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0410630282195 0.0819641961636 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.2329268293 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 61.2550243902 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 11.4140731707 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.