A friend, who lives in another country, has invited to you come and stay with him/her on your next holiday. You are too busy to accept the invitation. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: –
thank him/her for the invitation
explain why you cannot come
ask for his suggestion when you can come
Dear ABC,
I received your invitation for homestay for the Christmas holidays this year. I know it's a great way to enjoy together and experience the scenic beauty of switzerland. But, due to some personal reasons it is not possible this time. I will explain to you my situation ahead.
First of all, I thank you my amigo for the invitation. I was happy to open the beautifully crafted handmade note which I got in my letterbox this morning. The places you decided are fantastic for the adventure and drinks and swiss chocolates are mouth-watering for the evening party. Although, I want to be a part of this as I was also thinking about a trip to any other country this winter. Now, it's not possible for me to come to your place. Basically, our Senior Manager has hosted a welcome party in Thailand for all the new employees that joined the company this year. As, you know I have recently got this job so unfortunately I have to be a part of this to get along with the boss and the rest of my staff members. He is quiet a nice guy which makes it impossible for me to make an excuse of not attending this venture. I hope you understand the problem.
By the way, I was also thinking to join you in the summer holidays in the coming year. Kindly, make another trip like this as I have always dreamt of seeing switzerland someday. Moreover, it has been so long we have seen each other. Last, I remember we were in college. Please make invite me next time and I will surely come.
Best wishes to you and your family.
XYZ
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 86, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...he Christmas holidays this year. I know its a great way to enjoy together and exper...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, so, you know, by the way, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 52.0 32.9175257732 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1238.0 937.175257732 132% => OK
No of words: 284.0 206.0 138% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.35915492958 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 3.78020617076 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50927657993 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 127.690721649 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577464788732 0.622605031667 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 397.8 290.88556701 137% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.13402061856 153% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 12.6804123711 150% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.8717640357 44.8134815571 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.1578947368 76.5299724578 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.9473684211 16.8248392259 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.68421052632 4.34317383033 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 7.41237113402 175% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211584556187 0.216113520407 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0735513100067 0.0766984524023 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0703902898571 0.0603063233224 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157202795381 0.12726935374 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0299209118739 0.0580467560999 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.6 8.37731958763 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.42 8.71597938144 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.06 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 41.2886597938 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.