Dear ABC,
I hope you are in good spirits as always. I am happy to share the news about my recent move to a different house. I wanted to invite you and your family to our housewarming party. I will explain the reason of the sudden change in location further ahead.
As, you know I am an Army officer and I have to move with my team constantly to many other places. Suddenly, The Chief officer of our regiment issued me a new location in Punjab for posting and to perform my duties. So, I got this beautiful house near the countryside. There is a big lawn outside and varieties of vegetables and flowers making the scenic view appealing to the eyes.
Moreover, there are 3 rooms inside for my family members fully furnished and spacious. A large dinning hall for the family to have food together all the time. My bedroom is linked to a gracious balcony where I can see the lake flowing near our place. It is so refreshing to me.
I belief you might be excited to know more about the place. Please come with all your family members to the party and enjoy the same sensation that I felt. See you soon.
XYZ
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 35, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[3]
Message: The adverb 'always' is usually not used at the end of a sentence.
...ABC, I hope you are in good spirits as always. I am happy to share the news about my ...
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Line 2, column 181, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... your family to our housewarming party. I will explain the reason of the sudden c...
^
Line 5, column 3, Rule ID: BELIEF_BELIEVE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'believe' (verb) instead of belief (noun)?
Suggestion: believe
...ur place. It is so refreshing to me. I belief you might be excited to know more about...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, so, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 901.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 208.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.33173076923 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33726543771 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 127.690721649 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615384615385 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 293.4 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.2806569152 44.8134815571 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 60.0666666667 76.5299724578 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.8666666667 16.8248392259 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.73333333333 4.34317383033 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.94845360825 203% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181026810222 0.216113520407 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0550085306774 0.0766984524023 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0488426778313 0.0603063233224 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107641205859 0.12726935374 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0561152793631 0.0580467560999 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.9 8.37731958763 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 70.7449484536 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.24 8.71597938144 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.94 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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