Dear sir/Madam
My name is Anna Monte. I have signed
a contract with your company. I am extremely
thankful to you for giving me an immense
opportunity to work for this reputated organization. I am writing this letter to inform you about the requirements
related to my accomodation so that
I could get a pleasant stay.
First of all, I will be joining the Company
at end of next month. I will work for
Toronto, branch of the Company. My
Work Contract is valid for three years
Which could extend in the future so
I would be need the accomodation for
the same frame. Moreover I would
need a 2 Bhk appartment with Kitchen
hall and some furniture also because
I am coming with family to stay there. Secondly,I prefer the location for accomodation that would be convenient
So that I can travel by transport or walk
I would be moving to Canada on 20th June
2021. Before my Joining I have planned
to spend some quality time with my family
so I have decided to stay at my cousin's home in Vancouver.In 29th June I would be moving to Canada and shifted into recommended place which has been provided by company.
I am looking forward to hear from you soon
your faithfully
Anna Monte
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...is Anna Monte. I have signed a contract with your company. I am extremely thank...
^^
Line 6, column 39, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... opportunity to work for this reputated organization. I am writing this letter t...
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Line 6, column 55, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... work for this reputated organization. I am writing this letter to inform you ab...
^
Line 6, column 116, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ter to inform you about the requirements related to my accomodation so that I ...
^^^
Line 7, column 27, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...equirements related to my accomodation so that I could get a pleasant stay. ...
^^
Line 7, column 36, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ts related to my accomodation so that I could get a pleasant stay. First of a...
^^^
Line 12, column 27, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... Company. My Work Contract is valid for three years Which could extend in the f...
^^
Line 15, column 17, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
...d the accomodation for the same frame. Moreover I would need a 2 Bhk appartment with K...
^^^^^^^^
Line 18, column 48, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , I
...ming with family to stay there. Secondly,I prefer the location for accomodation th...
^^
Line 19, column 8, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...dation that would be convenient So that I can travel by transport or walk I wo...
^^
Line 19, column 35, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ient So that I can travel by transport or walk I would be moving to Canada on ...
^^
Line 23, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e quality time with my family so I have decided to stay at my cousins home in Va...
^^
Line 23, column 60, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: In
...to stay at my cousins home in Vancouver.In 29th June I would be moving to Canada a...
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Line 25, column 22, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to hearing'.
Suggestion: to hearing
...ded by company. I am looking forward to hear from you soon your faithfully Anna Mo...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 1.00243902439 1197% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 5.60731707317 589% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1006.0 965.302439024 104% => OK
No of words: 215.0 196.424390244 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.67906976744 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65093430268 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 106.607317073 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572093023256 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 306.9 283.868780488 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 1.53170731707 914% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 60.1575067621 43.030603864 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.4545454545 112.824112599 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5454545455 22.9334400587 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.09090909091 5.23603664747 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 22.0 3.83414634146 574% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 14.0 1.69756097561 825% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204087999908 0.215688989381 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0814491395016 0.103423049105 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0666085214444 0.0843802449381 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0494498614884 0.15604864568 32% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0718365838472 0.0819641961636 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.2329268293 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 11.4140731707 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.