Millions of tourists visit places of natural beauty (mountains, lakes and beaches) every year. However, they sometimes leave rubbish behind in these places.
Why has this happened? What can be done to solve the problem?
Natural scenery attracts large numbers of sightseers, but after their leaving, there are much rubbish left in these places. This essay will discuss the reasons for the problem and offer some solutions.
There are two main reasons for this problem. The principal reason is that tourists are unaware of environmental protection and responsibility. Without education from schools or media, the tourist who always litter everywhere including mountains, lakes and beaches think littering is not harmful to themselves now and it is convenient for them to drop litter everywhere. As a result, rubbish can be easily found in places of natural beauty. The second reason for the problem is the management issues of natural scenery areas. For example, few garbage cans placed in the natural attractions, sightseers do not find them to drop litter. Therefore, they have to litter everywhere. Meanwhile, when seeing tourist dropping litter, the employees working in natural attractions do not prevent the tourists from the bad behavior, warn them not to litter in time, and even educate them about environmental protection.
There are various measures that can be taken to address the problem. Public environmental protection programs provided by the media and schools could be funded by governments, while littering everywhere including natural attractions should be heavily fined. As individuals, we can change the situation by doing things as simple as dropping rubbish in garbage cans while touring the attractions or walking outside. Also, we should do our best to stop people littering in the natural attraction areas. Seeing other tourists dropping litter, we should try to prevent them and make them drop it into rubbish cans, but if they ignore us and continue to drop litter, we can help them to drop rubbish into cans. At least, the natural attractions are still clean and pretty.
In conclusion, there are various reasons for litter left in natural scenery and a wide range of measures need to be tackle this problem.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, second, so, still, therefore, while, at least, for example, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1705.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2786377709 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7395270021 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.513931888545 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 512.1 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.4328676127 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.294117647 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.94117647059 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189471109192 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0767348925661 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0465438697349 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122615383698 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0259542069029 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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