Dear Mr. ABC,
I am your tenant from last 2 months. I live in room No. 20 of your PG. The problem of water leaking is still going till this date and no action has been taken even after so many complaints. I will elaborate you the whole matter ahead.
There is a leakage of tap in the bathroom of room No.19 for quite some time and when I asked him to repair it. There was a nod but still nothing has been done by him as if he is having a deaf ear or something. Then, I made a written complaint to the warden so that necessary action can be taken and repair work be done quickly. As, I am not able to use my washroom because of this mess and it is an uncomfortable situation for me. After some days warden gave me the real reason for the leakage he told me that the water pipe has corroded and it will be fixed in 2 to 3 days.
Still, no circumstances has changed for me and now even warden is not talking and listening to my queries. So, I request you to please take some strict action on the warden for negligence of duty and get the water pipe fixed as soon as possible. It will be a big favor and relief.
Thanking you,
Yours faithfully,
XYZ
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 442, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'days'' or 'day's'?
Suggestion: days'; day's
...omfortable situation for me. After some days warden gave me the real reason for the ...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, still, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 5.05154639175 218% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 924.0 937.175257732 99% => OK
No of words: 229.0 206.0 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.03493449782 4.54256449028 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.24865814524 2.54303337028 88% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593886462882 0.622605031667 95% => OK
syllable_count: 289.8 290.88556701 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.4227579724 44.8134815571 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.0769230769 76.5299724578 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6153846154 16.8248392259 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.84615384615 4.34317383033 43% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137280200863 0.216113520407 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0525956436696 0.0766984524023 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0460025376284 0.0603063233224 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0900005646716 0.12726935374 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0596842191559 0.0580467560999 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.4 8.37731958763 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 70.7449484536 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 5.8 8.71597938144 67% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.62 7.59969072165 87% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 442, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'days'' or 'day's'?
Suggestion: days'; day's
...omfortable situation for me. After some days warden gave me the real reason for the ...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, still, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 5.05154639175 218% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 924.0 937.175257732 99% => OK
No of words: 229.0 206.0 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.03493449782 4.54256449028 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.24865814524 2.54303337028 88% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593886462882 0.622605031667 95% => OK
syllable_count: 289.8 290.88556701 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.4227579724 44.8134815571 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.0769230769 76.5299724578 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6153846154 16.8248392259 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.84615384615 4.34317383033 43% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137280200863 0.216113520407 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0525956436696 0.0766984524023 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0460025376284 0.0603063233224 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0900005646716 0.12726935374 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0596842191559 0.0580467560999 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.4 8.37731958763 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 70.7449484536 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 5.8 8.71597938144 67% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.62 7.59969072165 87% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.