The two bar charts compares that the number of marriage and divorce rates in USA and in the same interval next figure about adult Americans marital between same year 1970 and 2000.
In details, number of marriages rates in 1970 were observed 2.5 million in USA whereas the rate of divorce were one million. The same number of marriage rate was increased approximately 0.4 million than 1970.After that the rates of marriage was declined slightly over the next 20 years and reached at 2 billion per year. It is predicted that over the 20 years the divorces rate were minimal difference only 0.1 million.The divorces rates in the USA was observed as same position in 1970 and 2000, at 1 billion.
The second bar chart shows that the 70 per cent of adults were recorded in married group in 1970, whereas nearly 60 per cent of same group were predicted in 2000, only 12% of American people of the group of never married in 1970 and approximately 7% and 2% observed in group of widowed and divorced respectively. Similarly there were 20% of Americans in group of never married, approximately 4% of widowed and almost 10% of American in divorced group in 2000.
On the whole, the marriage rates of USA drops rapidly after the date of 1980 and rates of divorces were observed higher in 1980.
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The two bar charts compares that the number of marriage and divorce rates
The two bar charts compare the number of marriage and divorce rates
After that the rates of marriage was declined
After that the rate of marriage was declined
the divorces rate were minimal difference
the divorces rate has minimal difference
The divorces rates in the USA was observed
The divorces rates in the USA were observed
the marriage rates of USA drops rapidly
the marriage rate of USA drops rapidly
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