Recently, there has been an argument that holding a worldwide sport event will bring benefits or drawbacks to the host country. It seems to me that the merits of hosting an international sports event are overshadowed by its demerits.
On the one hand, there are a number of benefits that an international sports event brings to the host country. First, hosting an international sport event will raise the country’s awareness. A world class tournament will have numerous international audiences, which is a chance for the host nation to promote their local tourism. Holding an international sports event also helps to increase the patriotism among the citizens of the hosting country due to the fact that they will be proud of seeing their country on the international headlines during the entire event.
Despite the aforementioned advantages, I personally believe that a worldwide sports tournament does more harm than good for the host. There are many national security threats during the entire event due to the huge number of international fans coming to the host country. Criminals and terrorists may mingle with this massive movement to the country for illegal purposes. Additionally, hosting an international sports event may become a financial burden for the country. The government has to spend a gigantic amount of money to prepare infrastructure for a temporary event, while there may be a shortage of money for other sectors like education, poverty - alleviation.
In summary, because of the mentioned reasons, I am of the opinion that the disadvantages of hosting a world class sports tournament outweighs its advantages.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 78, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
..., I personally believe that a worldwide sports tournament does more harm than good for...
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Line 7, column 115, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
... disadvantages of hosting a world class sports tournament outweighs its advantages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, may, so, while, as to, in summary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1386.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33076923077 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06744166012 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.526923076923 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 428.4 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.9834431949 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.5 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6666666667 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.83333333333 7.06120827912 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.285518169266 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129510927564 0.084324248473 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0554646026912 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17728973311 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0602860928528 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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