Your son’s elementary school provides free
lunches to the children. Recently, one child
experienced an allergic reaction to the food.
The principle of the school has decided to
reevaluate the lunch program and is asking
for parents’ input.
Which option do you prefer? Explain your
choice.
Option A: Require children to be tested for
allergies
Option B: Require children to bring their
own lunch
I personally think children should bring their own lunches to
school. Even though free lunch is a tempting option for parents,
I think the children would be better off if they brought their own
homemade lunches.
Parents know their children much better than the school staff
does. If a child has allergies, the parents can customize the
child’s diet to suit his/her needs. This way, parents won’t be
worrying all the time about their child having a reaction at
school.
Another reason why I think children should bring their own
lunches is because the quality of food will be better if it is
homemade. Some families prefer to eat organic food, and the
school food is never organic. In my experience, the school food
tends to consist primarily of carbs and sugar which is not
healthy for the children.
Considering these reasons, I believe it would be better for
children to bring their own lunches to school. Parents will be
able to relax knowing that their children will be healthy and safe
from allergic reactions. Again, these are my personal beliefs, but
I will support whatever the school decides to do.
I appreciate the opportunity to provide input on this issue.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 41.998997996 43% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1010.0 1615.20841683 63% => OK
No of words: 201.0 315.596192385 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02487562189 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39288484341 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 176.041082164 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.577114427861 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 275.4 506.74238477 54% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.9013330745 49.4020404114 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 84.1666666667 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.75 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.66666666667 7.06120827912 24% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 19.0 4.38176352705 434% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.299644354205 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119790121722 0.084324248473 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0344384658842 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0948402473585 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0685767084317 0.056905535591 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 50.2224549098 144% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.54 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 78.4519038076 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.33 Out of 6
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