These days many people leave their country to work abroad and take their family with them. Do you think benefits of this outweigh disadvantages in terms of family development?
In this traditional era individuals are going to developed countries for work opportunities with their family.I Believe that there are more benefits rather than drawbacks which i mentioning in this essay.
First of all, i believe that there are fewer loses of work at other nations. to elaborate it ,at our nation ,people have all kind of necessaries and income sources at there homes . If they plan to go abroad with family, firstly they will sale all things to settle there. Secondly , lose of money for visa process.They should follow the work schedule of developed countries at own nation for well growth in income.
On the other hand, they have a lot of advantages at abroad for spend joyful life. To explicate it, we can grape different kind of employment opportunities facilities of govt, education system, lows etc. For Epitome, One of the survey of US government consumed that 21 % people settle their for good education system and work availability.
Moreover, Most of the Individuates move on another nation due to their luxury lifestyle. In other word, people want to spend their life with their own way which is not possible at their developing countries. For instance, As per a survey of govt, 13% people from every developing country move at growth-ed
nations for luxury lifestyle .
To Conclusion, Most of the Messes prefer for other countries to adopt there lifestyle, Verities of Education system, and for Job opportunities. Low makers should focus on the job opportunities and facilities for enjoyment at lowest cost.Thus, people can spend their lives without any difficulties.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, well, for instance, kind of, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1346.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15708812261 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8344018954 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.593869731801 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 419.4 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.1547123937 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.538461538 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0769230769 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.07692307692 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183595206929 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0734938718869 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0659393325587 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104566383897 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0779715534537 0.056905535591 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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