In many countries, there is a shortage of housing due to growing population. Some people argue that new towns should be built in the countryside, others argue for the regeneration of cities. What are the advantages and disadvantages of building new towns in the country side?
In today’s fast-paced life, the trend of the increasing population has accelerated the problem of housing availability at an exponential rate. Some like-minded people foster this thinking that new cities should be developed on the outskirts, while others oppose this idea. However, I will discuss both advantages and disadvantages, before reaching a conclusion. The following paragraphs tend to highlight some important aspects of this issue.
There are numerous arguments surrounding my viewpoint, but the most important factor that needs to be considered is that setting up new towns in the countryside will not only contribute to economic housing but also lead to several other benefits in various fields. In other ,words it is asserted that the creation of new towns helps in enhancing the living conditions of citizens by reducing pressure on natural resources, providing better infrastructure and lower pollution levels. For example, in cities like Toronto, where the houses are super expensive to afford, the development of other clustered towns in the catchment, has made owning a home in the vicinity of Toronto quite affordable. Therefore redeveloping the countryside as new cities play a vital role in society.
On the other hand, it is also possible to make an opposing case. Critics argue that setting up towns in the outskirts is only likely to have a negative impact by disturbing the ecological balance caused by deforestation. Needless to say along with the wide range of demerits it offers, more cities at outer locations also aids in the reduction of land available for agriculture, which has very serious repercussions on society as farming is the primary source of food and several raw materials required for the industry. For instance, lesser land for agriculture will cause scarcity of food supplies and inflation. Thus, creating sub towns plays a negative role as well.
In the light of the above discussion, it is fair and justifiable to say that setting up new urban areas in the periphery of main cities have both positive as well as negative impact on society. However, the benefits outshine their drawbacks.
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1805.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 343.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26239067055 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93777170602 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588921282799 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 579.6 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 76.7956595996 49.4020404114 155% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.333333333 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8666666667 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.6 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.286978979204 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0779781565836 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0517666429255 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146121274663 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.069331208328 0.056905535591 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.79 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 78.4519038076 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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