In today's rapidly changing globalized world it is very important have a great vision and decision making ability in each individual. Perhaps it is fair to mention that these essential qualities should be attain at the early age of a person. Therefore to achieve great vision and decision making abilities, it is very important for parents/ guardian to provide a healthy and helping environment for kids. However, it does not mean that parents should start spoon feeding the children. In this topic will discuss, why numerous of parents think that helping their children with homework is good help or they should let their children to finish the homework on their own.
In first hand, nevertheless, it is important to provide assistance to the kids in their early age for the school work or homework. That's how they can learn to complete the work provided by school. In many surveys it is also proven that in order to build a bright future of students it is important to give proper guidance, whether it is by class teacher or by parents. In addition, to prove their kids are better that other children some people try to help their kids more than the required.
On the other hand, students can be more confident if they are doing work on their own. However, this independent work should be done at later period of the school/ college. Juvenile should do school work or projects independently. It is a basic key to have a great future and confident personality. Moreover, in past few decades because of advancement in technologies, students are more independent when it comes to assigned work/ school project.
In my opinion, parents should realize that only at early period of school kids need help that too only required. Once they are grownup they should let them handle the work on their own. It is important to have their own point of view and free work spirit which can help in future to make decision and create their own knowledge from their own experience.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 205, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'attained'?
Suggestion: attained
...hat these essential qualities should be attain at the early age of a person. Therefore...
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Line 1, column 242, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...be attain at the early age of a person. Therefore to achieve great vision and decision ma...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 132, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: That's
...ly age for the school work or homework. Thats how they can learn to complete the work...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 114, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Once” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... kids need help that too only required. Once they are grownup they should let them h...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, therefore, in addition, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1634.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 340.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80588235294 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53452970597 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.494117647059 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 491.4 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.2098302636 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.1176470588 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.47058823529 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.398264388666 0.244688304435 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115852925199 0.084324248473 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.150398373887 0.0667982634062 225% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.23521928804 0.151304729494 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100889051346 0.056905535591 177% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 50.2224549098 136% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 205, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'attained'?
Suggestion: attained
...hat these essential qualities should be attain at the early age of a person. Therefore...
^^^^^^
Line 1, column 242, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...be attain at the early age of a person. Therefore to achieve great vision and decision ma...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 132, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: That's
...ly age for the school work or homework. Thats how they can learn to complete the work...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 114, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Once” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... kids need help that too only required. Once they are grownup they should let them h...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, therefore, in addition, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1634.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 340.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80588235294 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53452970597 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.494117647059 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 491.4 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.2098302636 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.1176470588 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.47058823529 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.398264388666 0.244688304435 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115852925199 0.084324248473 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.150398373887 0.0667982634062 225% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.23521928804 0.151304729494 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100889051346 0.056905535591 177% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 50.2224549098 136% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.