It is true that, in this contemporary era, sports are being gained more popularity in all over the world among people, where some people believe that it is mandatory in our life. on the other side, sizeable majority of people also introspect it is only for free time. Furthermore, according to my perspective, sports play a vital role in our country as well.
To start with, people have lack of knowledge how to manage groups so when sports played by them then take more knowledge how to co-operate with group members in a good way. Secondly, if anybody has a keen interest in different sports so they can earn high amount of money. Thirdly, people prefer to watch sports for their entertainment purpose for getting some relief. For example, virat kohli he is a well-known cricketer in whole world. In addition, he is taking high salary and do hard work.
Looking at the other view, there are numerous points.
Firstly, sports are astounding for our health if we play on daily basis it may prevent some diseases like heartattack and blood pressure and so on. Moreover, it is good for rejunating our mind or getting some relief from stress. Additionally, it improves our concentration power and bones and help to keep fit.
For instance, in recent research, we got to know, many scientists or doctors contemplate that sports are good for spending our leisure time.
On a concluding note, undoubtedly, playing sports are good for using our free time in correct way yet, we must understand that sports have lots of advantages for human body mentally, or physically as well as for our economy.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 180, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: On
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, if, look, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, third, thirdly, well, as for, for example, for instance, in addition, as well as, it is true, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1327.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84306569343 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64457551162 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.63503649635 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 406.8 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.7065367524 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.7857142857 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5714285714 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.9285714286 7.06120827912 197% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146475506122 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0543295101455 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0357718909329 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0832983039157 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0355848831828 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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