Some people say that the government should not put money on building theatres and sports stadiums. They should spend more money on medical care and education. Do you agree or disagree?
It is a highly debatable issue whether the government spends money on the health system and education. Rather than, theatres and sports stadiums. In my opinion, both things are important. government should allocate equal resources for these things.
Nowadays, basic medical facilities are more important for the general public. if people are more healthy and they will be working more productivity of work and the country will prosper as a whole. government should spend more money on health facilities. In contrast, if the government proper money on medical facilities So people lives could be saved. But, unfortunately, this should not happen, at least, there are also the elderly who paid taxes when they are working and now need good medical life.
Moreover, a good education is should be the main priority of the government. today, many children belong to a deprived background they want a good and free education system. they will defiantly require high-quality education if they succeed in later life.
On the other hand, theatres and sports stadiums are equally essential for people. Art and entertainment is also a basic human need. Theatrical shows provide entertainment and at the same time preserve our culture and tradition. Our artists earn names and fame for our country. Sports stadiums, similarly, attract millions of spectators to watch matches every year. Many more millions watch games on television, read about them in newspapers, and discuss them with their friends. Therefore, we cannot say that these are unnecessary expenditures and therefore the government should ignore them.
To put it in a nutshell, I pen down saying that, medicine and education are needs that we recognize, but theatrical or sports events are also basic needs. Therefore governments should allocate resources for both these things.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, similarly, so, therefore, at least, in contrast, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.0 214% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 1.00243902439 1297% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 16.0 6.8 235% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 5.60731707317 446% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 21.0 33.7804878049 62% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 3.97073170732 353% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1554.0 965.302439024 161% => OK
No of words: 290.0 196.424390244 148% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35862068966 4.92477711251 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 3.73543355544 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76336660723 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 106.607317073 160% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589655172414 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 470.7 283.868780488 166% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 1.53170731707 392% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 8.94146341463 235% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 13.0 22.4926829268 58% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.2219034691 43.030603864 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.0 112.824112599 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.8095238095 22.9334400587 60% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.04761904762 5.23603664747 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 1.69756097561 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 3.70975609756 377% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.342381531211 0.215688989381 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0912413672328 0.103423049105 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0773116580928 0.0843802449381 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174525838609 0.15604864568 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0602279547701 0.0819641961636 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.2329268293 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 61.2550243902 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.3012195122 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.22 11.4140731707 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 40.7170731707 187% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 11.4329268293 44% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.9970731707 65% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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