Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology. In what ways has technology affected personal relationships? Has this become a positive or negative development?
In this competitive world, technology has become heated in market and technology plays a paramount role to framing the developmental in blueprint of nation. In this present scenario, the method of folks use to communicate to one another has been altered owing to varied types of gizmos. This essay will not only discuss that what ways it has been impacted to the relationship but also I will explain that why I considered that this betterment is an negative, in the upcoming paragraph.
The predominate justification to support my inclination is that there are mainly merely prominent way in which masses had been got effected by latest gadget .Firstly, how peoples used to interact to the near and dearest in bygone days by visiting they relatives at they home however, this activity had been vanished due to the fact of technology has become to fastest and smarter and it is too convenient to communicate to other person by various types of online application: Tango , Instagram , and Facebook. To cite and relevant example, according to the data of cambridge university is that the in the world, millions of people have spend they quality of time on online websites.
Considering Further, looking at the negative sides is that by passing the time it will likely to effect human eye site when they spend more time on mobile phone For instance in India, appropriate more than 50 % of citizens had been installed goggles . Moreover, it is interesting to note that the people will get trouble to understand conflicts of other people whenever one should have encounter issues in they life because gadget not always aid to human being to cope with huddles. Furthermore, there is a significant negative of the related woe is that the people would likely to mitigate to share about they joy and sorrow due to spending much more time on internet.
In conclusion, although without the technology world is totally handicraft yet technology should be not impacted on human being is an first safety and priority because human has discovered technology.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, look, moreover, so, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1707.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 341.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00586510264 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77639705235 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571847507331 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 555.3 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 37.0 20.2975951904 182% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 106.481088566 49.4020404114 216% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 189.666666667 106.682146367 178% => OK
Words per sentence: 37.8888888889 20.7667163134 182% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.1111111111 7.06120827912 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231005528844 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0862594439398 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.055910447638 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129842706088 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0430278980309 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.1 13.0946893788 161% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.92 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.7 11.3001002004 157% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.37 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.96 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.8 10.1190380762 166% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.