; You are due to start a new job next week, but you will not be able to because you have some problems. Write a letter to your employer including
- your situation
- Your problems
- When you think you can start
Dear Sir/Madam,
First of all,I am thankful to you for considering me and offering me the role of a Design engineer.As per appointment letter received by human resources department,My joining will be from the date 11th July next week.I am really looking forward to this opportunity.However,I am writing this letter to tell you that unfortunately,I will not be able to join it by the date mentioned.There have been some problems related to documents.I have mentioned them below.
My relieve letter from the previous company hasn't arrived yet.They said it will take few more days.Also,my experience letter is also pending.Need to give both to human resource department together.So these are two main reasons. Also,as I am shifting to a new place, will have to go for my kid's admission to a new school in the next week itself and complete the formalities.I will be able to join by then only;that is probably after 10 more days of my joining date.
I hope you will understand and consider this as well.
Yours sincerely,
Ella Johnson
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir/Madam, First of all,I am thankful to you for co...
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Line 2, column 13, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , I
Dear Sir/Madam, First of all,I am thankful to you for considering me a...
^^
Line 2, column 100, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: As
...fering me the role of a Design engineer.As per appointment letter received by huma...
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Line 2, column 144, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'resources'' or 'resource's'?
Suggestion: resources'; resource's
...er appointment letter received by human resources department,My joining will be from the ...
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Line 2, column 164, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , My
...r received by human resources department,My joining will be from the date 11th July...
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Line 2, column 218, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...ll be from the date 11th July next week.I am really looking forward to this oppor...
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Line 2, column 266, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: However
...lly looking forward to this opportunity.However,I am writing this letter to tell you th...
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Line 2, column 273, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , I
...king forward to this opportunity.However,I am writing this letter to tell you that...
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Line 2, column 329, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , I
...is letter to tell you that unfortunately,I will not be able to join it by the date...
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Line 2, column 382, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: There
...e able to join it by the date mentioned.There have been some problems related to docu...
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Line 2, column 433, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...been some problems related to documents.I have mentioned them below. My relieve...
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Line 3, column 45, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: hasn't
...elieve letter from the previous company hasnt arrived yet.They said it will take few ...
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Line 3, column 63, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: They
... the previous company hasnt arrived yet.They said it will take few more days.Also,my...
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Line 3, column 100, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Also
...et.They said it will take few more days.Also,my experience letter is also pending.Ne...
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Line 3, column 104, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , my
...hey said it will take few more days.Also,my experience letter is also pending.Need ...
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Line 3, column 142, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Need
...so,my experience letter is also pending.Need to give both to human resource departme...
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Line 3, column 198, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: So
...h to human resource department together.So these are two main reasons. Also,as I a...
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Line 3, column 233, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , as
...ther.So these are two main reasons. Also,as I am shifting to a new place, will have...
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Line 3, column 374, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...eek itself and complete the formalities.I will be able to join by then only;that ...
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Line 5, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...onsider this as well. Yours sincerely, Ella Johnson
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, look, really, so, then, well, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 863.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 173.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98843930636 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1851966392 2.54303337028 125% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 127.690721649 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.664739884393 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 270.9 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 12.6804123711 39% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 16.3608247423 208% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 160.844023824 44.8134815571 359% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 172.6 76.5299724578 226% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 34.6 16.8248392259 206% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 13.6 4.34317383033 313% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 20.0 2.54639175258 785% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253569637272 0.216113520407 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.128909873092 0.0766984524023 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0664520087332 0.0603063233224 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165316496427 0.12726935374 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0583262165309 0.0580467560999 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.4 8.37731958763 232% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 36.97 70.7449484536 52% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 3.82989690722 292% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 7.45979381443 223% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 8.71597938144 141% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.34 7.59969072165 123% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 29.5 8.62886597938 342% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 15.6 8.54432989691 183% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.