The graph below show the percentage of 18 to 25 year olds in University in four different countries Malaysia Singapore Thailand Philippines

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The graph below show the percentage of 18 to 25 year olds in University in four different countries Malaysia, Singapore, Thailand, Philippines

The line graph elucidates how many 18 to 25 year old students were interested in different universities Singapore, Malaysia, Thailand, Philippines in the year between 1961to 2011.
Overall, it can be manifested that the highest proportion of students were interested in Thailand university. However, the lowest percent of the Philippines University in the given periods.
Firstly, the increased percentage of 18 to 25 year old students were admission to Thailand university in the year 1961. which was a quarter and after two decades it 5 percent decreased drastically and it increased sharply in the year 2011.which was (two Fifth) 40 percent.Moreover, in Singapore university, 15 percent of students were an admission in the year 1961.it increased significantly in the year 1971 which was 30 percent and after some fluctuated and stood at in the year 2011.which was almost 35.90 percent.
Secondly, alleviating students were interested in Philippians and Malaysia university. In the year 1961 did not students admission to Malaysia university and 5 percent in 5 percent increased in Philippines university after a decade Malaysia was sharply increased and it peaked up in the year 2011which was 15 percent and Malaysia decreased in the year 1971 and 1991 and it sharply increased 10 percent in the year 2011.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 120, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Which
...o Thailand university in the year 1961. which was a quarter and after two decades it ...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 270, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Moreover
...ear 2011.which was two Fifth 40 percent.Moreover, in Singapore university, 15 percent of...
^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1106.0 965.302439024 115% => OK
No of words: 208.0 196.424390244 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31730769231 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1667039731 2.65546596893 119% => OK
Unique words: 90.0 106.607317073 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.432692307692 0.547539520022 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 323.1 283.868780488 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 22.4926829268 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 117.662783463 43.030603864 273% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 158.0 112.824112599 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.7142857143 22.9334400587 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.42857142857 5.23603664747 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.27174357711 0.215688989381 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.167042751191 0.103423049105 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.13645487065 0.0843802449381 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.207295434086 0.15604864568 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.114316812461 0.0819641961636 139% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.5 13.2329268293 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 61.2550243902 69% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.3012195122 142% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.17 11.4140731707 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 11.4329268293 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.9970731707 124% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 120, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Which
...o Thailand university in the year 1961. which was a quarter and after two decades it ...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 270, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Moreover
...ear 2011.which was two Fifth 40 percent.Moreover, in Singapore university, 15 percent of...
^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1106.0 965.302439024 115% => OK
No of words: 208.0 196.424390244 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31730769231 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1667039731 2.65546596893 119% => OK
Unique words: 90.0 106.607317073 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.432692307692 0.547539520022 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 323.1 283.868780488 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 22.4926829268 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 117.662783463 43.030603864 273% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 158.0 112.824112599 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.7142857143 22.9334400587 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.42857142857 5.23603664747 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.27174357711 0.215688989381 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.167042751191 0.103423049105 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.13645487065 0.0843802449381 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.207295434086 0.15604864568 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.114316812461 0.0819641961636 139% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.5 13.2329268293 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 61.2550243902 69% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.3012195122 142% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.17 11.4140731707 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 11.4329268293 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.9970731707 124% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.