As global warming has become a reality, the major concern of industry must be the impact of its products on the environment. What is the best way for countries to control fossil fuel emissions and other sources of greenhouse gases?
In the current society, everyone have been able to detect global warming. As it has become a reality, most industries’ concern is the impact of their products on the environment. There are many ways to control the amount of greenhouse gases. This essay will indicate the best way to take control of this problem.
For the first place, we can stop adding greenhouse gases to the air. It means we can do many things that avoid as much emission as possible. For instance, we can generate electricity without emissions. We can use renewable energy such as solar energy, ocean wave, etc instead of fossil fuels, which release greenhouse gases into the atmosphere. Another way to stop adding fossil fuel emissions is that we can travel without it. Burning fuels for transportation adds up to 14% of global greenhouse gas emissions worldwide. We can travel to work place by bikes, electric cars, which are environmental friendly so that we can reduce and avoid using fossil fuels.
Another best way to take control of the amount of greenhouse gases is that we can increase the Earth’s ability to pull them out of the air. Along with reducing the amount of carbon dioxide that we add to the air, we can also take action to increase the amount of carbon dioxide taken out of the air. The places where carbon dioxide is pulled out of the air are called carbon sinks. For example, planting trees, bamboo, and other plants increases the number of carbon sinks. There are also carbon dioxide removal technologies, which may be able to pull large amounts of greenhouse gases out of the atmosphere.
In conclusion, global warming has always been the most difficult problem for us to solve. However, it does not mean that we can not solve it. The two best ways to solve this problem are to stop adding greenhouse gases to the air and take them out of the air.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, may, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1535.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73765432099 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47876786397 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.484567901235 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 476.1 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.8960395774 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.7894736842 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0526315789 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.42105263158 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229392034134 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0843741731988 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0584383895896 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15166699919 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0543239361196 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 13.0946893788 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.33 Out of 6
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