You recently went to a public event for example an exhibition festival or show that you think your friend would enjoy Write a letter to a friend In your letter tell your friend what the event was explain why you think your friend would like the event invi

Dear Dave

Hope you are well. It's been quite long since we last spoke, possibly more than 5 years. I recently went for a musical drama at our college as chief guest since the event was sponsored by my organisation, whose center idea was zombies created due to advent of a man-made pandemic. Yes, i know this theme triggered some college memories. Infact, this is was the sole reason i couldn't wait to write you.
The play reminded me of the flamboyant use of dark shades, scary face masks, torned costumes and massive architechtures as upheld by you during our annual fest. The script was well written and enacted by bunch of fresh talent from our college. It was a delightful sight to see our old college with pinch of renovation and new folks on the same old theatre.
I would love to take you along with me for the next cultural fest on 14th of next month. Please come over, if possible.

Best regards
Hardik Sheth

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 286, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... to advent of a man-made pandemic. Yes, i know this theme triggered some college ...
^
Line 3, column 350, Rule ID: VBZ_VBD[1]
Message: Did you mean 'it'?
Suggestion: it
...red some college memories. Infact, this is was the sole reason i couldnt wait to w...
^^
Line 3, column 353, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'been'.
Suggestion: been
... some college memories. Infact, this is was the sole reason i couldnt wait to write...
^^^
Line 3, column 375, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
.... Infact, this is was the sole reason i couldnt wait to write you. The play reminded ...
^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, well

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 761.0 937.175257732 81% => OK
No of words: 167.0 206.0 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.55688622754 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.59483629437 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33128776641 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.74251497006 0.622605031667 119% => OK
syllable_count: 231.3 290.88556701 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.9801452196 44.8134815571 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.1818181818 76.5299724578 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1818181818 16.8248392259 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.09090909091 4.34317383033 25% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127527835851 0.216113520407 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0407123980839 0.0766984524023 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.042244025532 0.0603063233224 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0815307551072 0.12726935374 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0335523228291 0.0580467560999 58% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.6 8.37731958763 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.58 8.71597938144 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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