Nowadays, whether to opt for local or international products has attracted numerous controversies. While there are many people who advocate to purchase home grown products, others hold a view in favor of foreign production. In my opinion, despite the legitimate benefits of home grown products, people should take the advantage of foreign products wherever possible.
Many people who advocate to purchase home grown products are predominantly pertaining to its cultural benefits. The reason for this is that they believe in purchasing things that are rich in their own culture. This will not only bring indigenous culture to thrive and survive but also will have a unifying impact on the populace representing a country. Therefore, they strongly encourage to promote their own products. In addition, when they prioritize their own products over foreign products, they believe that they are creating more employment opportunities locally. This is more significant incase of developing countries where farmers, textile owners and many small scale companies are dependent on local populace for their business.
On the other hand, there are many people who hold a view that products from overseas are far superior to a certain extent. The main reason for holding on to this opinion is that the benefits of international products to the locals are abound. Firstly, people are able to see a notable difference in the prices of imported products. When they purchase imported products, they bring in substantial savings to many in various forms. Moreover, there is no compromise in the quality and are far superior in some ways. For instance, in recent times people are able to eat exotic fruits and vegetables that were not previously available or were extremely expensive. This opens up awide whole variety of new market to the populace.
In conclusion, while both views are commonly held in society, I personally believe that international products bring in various form of benefits to the population in terms of cost savings and quality produce. To address this issue, the government and society should make a concerted effort to find solutions.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 389, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'promoting'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'encourage' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: promoting
...try. Therefore, they strongly encourage to promote their own products. In addition, when t...
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Line 3, column 596, Rule ID: INCASE_OF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'in case of'?
Suggestion: in case of
...ities locally. This is more significant incase of developing countries where farmers, tex...
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Line 5, column 236, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'abounded'.
Suggestion: abounded
...nternational products to the locals are abound. Firstly, people are able to see a nota...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, so, therefore, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1812.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 341.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3137829912 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81472685769 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.521994134897 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 579.6 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.8782664018 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.666666667 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9444444444 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.61111111111 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178304273397 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0591932591754 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0594850944907 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119529275455 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0490193430999 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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