the best way to protect the environment is used in local resources like food and building materials rather than transporting resources from other places. to extend do you agree or disagree?
In the pace of life, Human being has been forgotten from the original task save the earth the extraordinary method to rescue the nature is that no need to relocate the various type of things from one place to another likewise food and building material. I firmly subscribe to the right notion and reason of my inclination is articulated in the upcoming paragraph
The predominant justification to support my ideology is that instead of migrating things, folks could establish the particular product of factory in the indigenous area in order to fulfill their needs and by performing this type of way it would be not only secure the nature but also on unemployment trade would like to be mitigate after workers acquire jobs in introduced industries . As a consequence, the cost of transport charge will be eradicated. To site an relevant example, in Newzealand, appropriate more than 70% of things had been started to use in the similar place in which it introduced.
Considering further, this is reasonable to the extent that the percentage of accidents will likely to be deteriorate owing to it contain heavy vehicles to relocate the items and during the journey sometimes it might jeopardy the things. moreover, masses also obtain benefit from the non transportable items. According to the survey of vehicle department more than 5% applied in the transportable thing and that taxes people must be paid.
Having gone through this matter it conclude that although to have the experience of newly things as well as different area products is a Paramount one, yet to rescue the nature comes essay first priority because save earth save environment
- Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar which causes many health problems Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar Do you agree or disagree 73
- The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011 Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 73
- The maps show the change in Pentland from 1980 to 2007 73
- The line graph shows the past and projected finances for a local authority in New Zealand 67
- Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems To what extent do you agree or disagree What other measures do you think might be effective 78
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, likewise, moreover, so, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1383.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06593406593 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84322497984 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.626373626374 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 443.7 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 20.2975951904 168% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 131.409605338 49.4020404114 266% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 172.875 106.682146367 162% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.125 20.7667163134 164% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.75 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.115296062687 0.244688304435 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0518482505537 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0280297972408 0.0667982634062 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0639936395177 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0269106830032 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.5 13.0946893788 149% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.97 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 11.3001002004 147% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.72 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.89 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 30.0 9.78957915832 306% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.1190380762 154% => OK
text_standard: 30.0 10.7795591182 278% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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