world is suffering from serval burning issues the the pollution have major effect on society in which disease are spreading all over the nation major number of mankind on the world by biodiversity cycle extended in the way loss of biodiversity they are main course in the issue of biodiversity and the problem are in forthcoming paragraph
To begin with, the major reason is measured of person half ine on responsibility about country especially for teenagers that should about the association despite having actor schedule in daily routine take some time for environment. many layman loading modern feel monkey are become over independent because of the administrator of not issuing the rules and regulation about the Global Warming country with who are idiot country tattooing garbage and their moreover biodiversity department proper manner about the environment for Eastern according to Times of India the biodiversity is increasing day by day in 2015
moreover, The major solution about his boss's is every common man should have the own charge phone recycle apart from this in majority of school should aware about the environment and things about the nature despite having over freedom about the life they should Mod concentrate on Environment Government should make sure that we do for our city and sometimes they want to take penalty you are making fault. other thing are about are conflict, In they case cannot do anchor because that is god given nature there should be a proper planning plan in teenager should a company in which teeth about how environment is useful in our daily life for Eastern according to connection of India after implementation this or it has been reduced in 2020.
In conclusion, biodiversity is essential for all the mankind because it will increase the life of every person and decrease health ratio in particular Nation benefit in the upcoming days.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: World
world is suffering from serval burning issues...
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Suggestion: the
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Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
...is suffering from serval burning issues the the pollution have major effect on society ...
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Suggestion: Many
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...e some time for environment. many layman loading modern feel monkey are become ov...
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Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, so, apart from, in conclusion, in particular, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1591.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13225806452 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69706164543 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.558064516129 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 513.9 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 77.0 20.2975951904 379% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 231.454504169 49.4020404114 469% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 397.75 106.682146367 373% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 77.5 20.7667163134 373% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 18.25 7.06120827912 258% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0296311503939 0.244688304435 12% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0177288881009 0.084324248473 21% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0154294236213 0.0667982634062 23% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0196364197333 0.151304729494 13% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0236183521891 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 41.5 13.0946893788 317% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -15.14 50.2224549098 -30% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.44779559118 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 34.5 11.3001002004 305% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.66 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.28 8.58950901804 131% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 29.0 9.78957915832 296% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 32.8 10.1190380762 324% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 29.0 10.7795591182 269% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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