The only way to reduce the amount of traffic in cities today is by reducing the need for people to travel from home for work, education or shopping.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Most cities around the world are suffering from the streets traffic. Indeed, it is believed that the only factor can decrease this traffic amount is to decline the number of people who need to go out to schools, jobs or even shops. However, keeping people at home during the day is inefficient solution.
It is claimed that if labors work from home, it will reduce traffic whereas that save their time and effort too. But, it would cause other problems since they will certainly face a lack in their relationships with the real life. Also, not all kind of jobs could be handled from a dista...
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is inefficient solution.
is an inefficient solution.
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