Numerous newschannels and newspaper are launched nowadays to host various crime incidents happening on daily basis. According to some people, T.V and newspaper should be prohibited to broadcast brutal crimal activities which terrifying the people and motivate the criminals also. In my opinion, I disagree that media should stop covering harsh incidents as it is greatly benefit citizens because they can act as alarm to others and help in reducing the crime rate in our country.
A good reason not to impose end to media for broadcasting deadly incidents is that it not only acts as informative but also alarming news for the citizens. People can take precautions before event happened. For example, when youngsters read about the such crimes which occuring due to drug and alcohol, they rethink before indulging themseleves into such practices. People often commit crimes if they come under the influence of drugs and alcohols. Another example, If parents watch such news that murdering of children is happening these days, they become attentive for their children and take measure to protect them.
Another point to consider is that highlighting the harsh punishment imposed on criminals by media means somehow ensuring that other criminals will not try to attempt it in the future.
For example, around two quaters of all citizens in india involving themselves in criminal activities.Bringing an end to media to cover dead-dealing incidents should , therefore will not produce better results as it is essential to alert people about it.
To conclude, coverage of violence has both positive and negative impact on the society. This, however, does not mean government should ask media to stop covering such events. Any such event can supress the freedom of press.
- Prevention is better than cure Researching and treating diseases is too costly so it would be better to invest in preventative measures To what extent do you agree 78
- Crimes and other kinds of information on TV and newspapers have bad consequences This kind of information should be restricted to be shown in media To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement 79
- Prevention is better than cure Researching and treating diseases is too costly so it would be better to invest in preventative measures To what extent do you agree 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: V
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Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
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Suggestion: benefited; benefitted
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Suggestion: Bringing
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
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Message: Did you mean 'alert'?
Suggestion: alert
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, therefore, for example, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1497.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3085106383 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75086013003 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.620567375887 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 460.8 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.4637774481 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.153846154 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6923076923 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.122237270614 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0403325294065 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0357436478194 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0636743557154 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0420617600913 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.38 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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