It is true that, in this contemporary era, junk food is being gained lots of popularity at an unprecedented rate in all over the world. However, sizeable majority of people introspect that it is not good for our health and It is also often debated that eating unhealthy diet leads to a sedentary lifestyle. According to my perspective, fast food impacts our life in various ways.
To commence with, many people contemplate that fast food is not good for our health because different type of chemicals are used by companies for staying their product longer in markets or for retaining the taste as well. Additionally, people have to confront some obstacles like, hearth disease, liver problem, diabetes e.t.c. Another reason could be, it doesn't contain valuable vitamins which we need alot during our whole day that is why we feel lack of weakness, laziness and so on. To exemplify, according to a survey it can be manifested that those people who prefer to take only traditional food they are better or outstanding in their work instead of thos who take only junk food.
Looking on the other view, it has some benefits as well. Firstly, people want to earn more money and they prefer to work whole day so after that they purchase frozen food from market to save their time. Secondly, most of the people think that taste is very astounding of these food and if they are not good so why people are advertising of these products. For example, my elder borther he is working in a company so he lives far away from us and these days he prefer to purchase food directly from market for saving his own time.
On a concluding note, undoubtedly, junk food has lots of benefits as well that it saves our time, provide delicious taste within a few minutes yet, we must understand that vitamins, proteins are indispensable for our body rather than anything. In addition to, we can also think that why elderly people used to say health is wealth.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, well, for example, in addition, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 24.0651302605 195% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1603.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 340.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71470588235 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51820190423 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576470588235 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 501.3 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.3771778061 49.4020404114 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.583333333 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.3333333333 20.7667163134 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.75 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238487763542 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0873242329455 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.04778563663 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144820782778 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0353773817923 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 50.2224549098 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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