Integration problems for people living abroad.
The bar chart below gives information about the percentage of the difficulties which are faced by people when they move to other foreign countries, according to people’s ages.
It can be easily seen that raising finances is the big problem not only for the 18-to-34-year-old group (nearly 35 percent), but also for the middle group (35 percent). While that problem is more easily solved by the people who is the oldest of all group.
About 32 percent of the people in the youngest group have trouble sorting out medical services. On the other hand, that is the most problematic challenge for the 35-to-54-year-old group with 37 percent, and for the people who is over 55 years old (about 36 percent).
In contrast to healthcare, only 2 percent of the individuals in the oldest group have difficulty finding schools for their children. However, it’s harder for the young generation (6 percent) and the middle age group (19 percent) to solve it.
In general, all age groups experience the same problems to some extent, but the proportion of the middle age group who have trouble sorting out healthcare is the highest percentage of all.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 166, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...t also for the middle group 35 percent. While that problem is more easily solved by t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, while, in contrast, in general, in contrast to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 944.0 965.302439024 98% => OK
No of words: 192.0 196.424390244 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91666666667 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78193265655 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 106.607317073 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567708333333 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 270.9 283.868780488 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.4032084185 43.030603864 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.0 112.824112599 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 22.9334400587 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.625 5.23603664747 222% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.13902439024 439% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175131110217 0.215688989381 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0896004468602 0.103423049105 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.03761642648 0.0843802449381 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102946478933 0.15604864568 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0464411622845 0.0819641961636 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.2329268293 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 61.2550243902 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 11.4140731707 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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