The problem of water shortage which was always debatable has now become more controversial with many people claiming that it is hazardous while other reject this notion. The substantial influence of this trend has sparked the controversy over the potential impact in recent years. In my opinion, the shortage of water as a natural resource is a great problem.
There are myriad of reasons which will further explain this arguments but the most preponderant one stems form the fact is that over population leads to migration and urbanization which results in creating imbalance and scarcity of resources. Another pivotal aspect is that mixture of pollution causes global warming which leads to natural disasters like floods, drought and under such conditions there is no water. Hence, it is apparent that water shortage is a global thereat.
Steps to deal with this problem are many but the most significant ones are not complicated but acceptable and practical. Besides this, there should be recycling of water and even rain water harvesting is very helpful in storing fresh water. Primarily, afforestation reduces pollution and maintains water cycles. Moreover, strict laws should be made against pollution.
To conclude, according to the arguments aforementioned above, one can reach to a conclusion that the problem of water crisis can be successfully addressed, provided that the above stated measures are taken.
- What are the causes of water shortage how should the nature resources be preserved and utilitied 78
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- improvement in health education science and trade are essential for the development of poor Nations how did the government or richer Nations should take responsibility for helping the poor Nations do you agree or disagree 78
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, hence, if, moreover, so, while, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1203.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 223.0 315.596192385 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39461883408 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79661763573 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.618834080717 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 371.7 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.6765385742 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.363636364 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2727272727 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.36363636364 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240893417316 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0965126826898 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0841061275417 0.0667982634062 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129296359523 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0452135040049 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.73 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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