Here, the chart demonstrates the information about fruits and vegetables which consume per day by UK citizens over the period of 8 years, units are measured in percentage.
overall, at a fleeting glance, It is manifest that the most striking citizen is Women which dominance the market, howbeit, children are made the least proportion to intake the fruits and vegetables.
At a first glance, the chart reveals that the initially, during the period from 2001 to 2003, the percentage of children consume hyganic items were presented well above 10% then in the remaining years by passing the period, the trend modestly inclined and reached to just below 25% during the end of the stipulated period. It is also interesting to note that the although the ratio of women to intake fruits and vegetables were nearly 27%, yet it slightly increased till 2005 at 30%, the similar proportions can be observed in the year 2007 but after reached to the peak at 35%.
Further analysis of the chart portrays that the percentage of fruits and vegetables by men was overwhelming increased in all the given year, starting from roughly 27% and settling to considerably just above 25%.
- Write a report describing the information in the graph below 11
- Some school leavers tend to go travelling or work for a period of time before going to university directly what do you think are the advantages and disadvantages 78
- Nowadays children watch a lot of TV and play video games However some people think that activities are not good for a child s mental health To what extent do you agree or disagree 73
- More and more people are using computers and electric devices to access information Therefore there is no need for printed books magazines and newspapers To what extent do you agree or disagree 84
- children 039 s activities The first graph shows the cultural and leisure activities that boys participate in whereas the second graph shows the activities in which the girls participate Write a report describing the information shown in the two pie gra 11
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Overall
...ars, units are measured in percentage. overall, at a fleeting glance, It is manifest t...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 158, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ren consume hyganic items were presented well above 10% then in the remaining yea...
^^
Line 3, column 360, Rule ID: THE_EXACTLY_THE[1]
Message: Duplicated 'the' in the phrase: 'the although the'. Did you mean 'although the'?
Suggestion: although the
...od. It is also interesting to note that the although the ratio of women to intake fruits and veg...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 444, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...uits and vegetables were nearly 27%, yet it slightly increased till 2005 at 30%...
^^
Line 3, column 467, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e nearly 27%, yet it slightly increased till 2005 at 30%, the similar proportion...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, then, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 972.0 965.302439024 101% => OK
No of words: 196.0 196.424390244 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95918367347 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65633628311 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 106.607317073 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602040816327 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 288.9 283.868780488 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 39.0 22.4926829268 173% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.4318257221 43.030603864 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 194.4 112.824112599 172% => OK
Words per sentence: 39.2 22.9334400587 171% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.2 5.23603664747 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183085457854 0.215688989381 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100312632284 0.103423049105 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0652438546367 0.0843802449381 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116278518891 0.15604864568 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0650002390586 0.0819641961636 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.5 13.2329268293 162% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.35 61.2550243902 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.3 10.3012195122 168% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.08 11.4140731707 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.52 8.06136585366 118% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 40.7170731707 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 11.4329268293 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.6 10.9970731707 160% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 11.0658536585 163% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.