You are a young entrepreneur (businessman) and want to start a new business. Write your to your friend seeking some suggestion for the same.
In your letter
Let him know about his new line of business that you interested to enter into.
Let him know why you consider him as an important person for advice.
Seek his advice.
Dear kith,
My name is navjot Kaur, and I'm writing to inform you about my future plan of opening a beauty salon. as you already know that I've great passion towards this field that's why I decided to run my own beauty salon. Also, I'd an experience of 2 years as a beauty specialist in Martix Unisex Saloon which would be very helpful for me.
Anyway, I think that you are the best person who can give me good suggestion about my plan, and you can preserve the future results of any action. Moreover, you are mature enough according to me that's why I consider you as my advisor.
Actually, I want that please guide me about what I should do regarding to my plan of beauty salon. If you have time, try to meet me in my home, I would like to discuss about the matter by sitting in a room.
I hope you will not say no to me. I'll be very grateful for you if you will visit me.
Yours lovingly,
Navjot Kaur.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
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Suggestion: As
... future plan of opening a beauty salon. as you already know that Ive great passion...
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Suggestion: I've
... beauty salon. as you already know that Ive great passion towards this field thats ...
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Suggestion: that's
...at Ive great passion towards this field thats why I decided to run my own beauty salo...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'd
...cided to run my own beauty salon. Also, Id an experience of 2 years as a beauty sp...
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Suggestion: that's
..., you are mature enough according to me thats why I consider you as my advisor. Ac...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'll'?
Suggestion: I'll
...m. I hope you will not say no to me. Ill be very grateful for you if you will vi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, anyway, if, moreover, regarding, so, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 739.0 937.175257732 79% => OK
No of words: 176.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.19886363636 4.54256449028 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.1342999583 2.54303337028 84% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.619318181818 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 234.0 290.88556701 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.9714754912 44.8134815571 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.9 76.5299724578 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6 16.8248392259 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 4.34317383033 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19960247238 0.216113520407 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0929525488332 0.0766984524023 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0412562363168 0.0603063233224 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123663274387 0.12726935374 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0348570980064 0.0580467560999 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.2 8.37731958763 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 70.7449484536 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.78 8.71597938144 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.99 7.59969072165 92% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 41.2886597938 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.