inoculations against cow flu are potentially lethal, however may save numerous lives. The argument that vies for routine inoculation is missing critical evidence and statistics in order to fully convince an audience that it is necessary.
First, statistics such as death rates, prevalence, and incidence of cow flu would greatly strengthen this argument if they show an obvious need for intervention. A high death rate would indicate that inoculation would save lives and a high prevalence and the number of potential lives saved would offset the possibility of a mortality by inoculation. Further...
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