Currently there is a trend towards the use of alternative forms of medicine. However, at the best these methods are ineffective and dangerous. What extended vdo you agree or disagree.
Although usage of various medicines slightly harmful as well as it might cause detrimental impact on people's health, nowadays consumption of antibiotics are trending. I vote against such a pessimistic viewpoint to major extent. My preference is explained further.
The fundamental reason for my inclination is that all types of antibiotics are manufactured in under observation by qualified Pharamassists.In other words, chemists do research on particles in labs, which will be used in production of antibiotics. Moreover, before launching any type of medicine, it would experiment on animals by scientists. After succed in thier experiment they have to prepare report about it and present to the government.If government permit to launch tested drugs only then any company can sale medicine . For example, due to introduced of corona vaccine, first it will tested on Monkey in 3 phase.
Additionally, such madicine help to control diseases namely diabetes, blood pressure and thyroid. Apart from this, these drugs gives ability to fight harmful bacteria in human body. For instance, Paracitamol named pills, which is taken in illness, it will prevent viruses to spread into whole body. Furthermore,
However, every coin has two sides. One main nagative consequence of this tendency is that overuse of drugs can nagative effect on health. If doctor used to give steroid drug to the patient then it may be chance to create blood clot, because of clotting of blood patience can suffering to heart attack. In fact, sometimes drugs will not only kill one type of unwanted bacteria but also destroy healthy cells.
To sum up, these days all types of disease will destroyed or reduce by availability of medicines;yet I should suggest that do not take any types of drugs without doctor's precipitation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, so, then, well, apart from, for example, for instance, in fact, as well as, in other words, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1531.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33449477352 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96302241513 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.682926829268 0.561755894193 122% => OK
syllable_count: 484.2 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.1359392638 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.066666667 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1333333333 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6666666667 7.06120827912 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0368407217985 0.244688304435 15% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.010248769609 0.084324248473 12% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0128227271868 0.0667982634062 19% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0202586184195 0.151304729494 13% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00395161847005 0.056905535591 7% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.59 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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